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Devastate Lasting replied to the topic November Critique Piece: Psychotic in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@sarah-inkdragon Thank you for taking the time to review! I’ll try to get around to yours, too!
-Thank you! I believe I’ve said before that our styles are very similar! However, I just can’t seem to keep up this style when writing longer works than a short story…XD
-Ah, yes, I, too, love villains, anti-heroes, and the like. pretty much all of my favorite characters consist of them. Or of a really nice minor character. I’m glad you liked Eleven, maybe I will add a description in the story.
-Well, I’m glad you have a stomach for such things. Thanks for pointing out the character actions. I wasn’t trying to go into too much detail on that, though I will try to pose things slightly clearer.
-Ah, yes, the ending. I’m not sure if I myself know what happened, though one thing I know for sure: the Game was programmed. Since basically everything I write ties in to my current huge WIP, I will clear that up later in the series.
Thank you for reviewing! I’m glad you liked it, and I do hope to write something else closely related to this story.












