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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
LOL SLOANE IS HILARIOUS AND I LOVE HER TO DEATH!
Mismatched eye girl cocked her head at Nightraven, who got the definite impression that warrior woman wanted to kill her the most painful way possible.
Nightraven smirked.
Try it. Make my day.
She may not have looked like a fighter, but she could take out any person in a fight no problem. She could practically feel Dawnthrush egging the warrior on.
Just try it. Do it. I’m in need of entertainment.
“If you plan to stay here, I would tell this place would be that,” fighter girl said.
Then she pushed past them and swished her rusty red hair in their faces.
Nightraven allowed the slightest curl of her lip, spinning on her heel to watch her swaggering away. How she wanted to show the girl how real fighters fought.
She caught hold of her dagger, proud of her unassuming weapon. Then she stopped. Let the other girl attack first. She would. Her muscles were quivering.
Then she spun around, tapping her lip. Nightraven gave her a seductive grin.
She needs something from me, the idiot.
“Name’s Sloane, mayhance, but you can call me ‘sir,'” the girl said, tipping her head mockingly. Nightraven’s stomach curled with the urge to smack her. “Now, who do I have the ple’sure of insulting?”
Nightraven chuckled quietly. “My name, miss, is Nightraven. This here is my favorite sidekick Dawnthrush. And you’re going to have to try a bit harder than that to insult me, friend,” Nightraven drew out the word “friend” as if it disgusted her.
Sloane gave her a grin that barely managed to hide her own disgust. Nightraven liked having enemies. They were fun to kill.
Sloane would probably have attacked her, but her eye caught on something behind Nightraven. Nightraven spun around to look, and Dawnthrush stayed facing Sloane so that Sloane wouldn’t attack Nightraven with her guard down.
“Hmm. Wings must be the in thing these days, yes?” Nightraven murmured, her voice flowing with a liquid grace. She took such pleasure in having interrupted Sloane…
Feel free to change anything that was un-Sloane-like! 😉












