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Chalice replied to the topic Short Story Critique in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
@devastate-lasting, Hey, I just read through your story. I really liked it. 🙂
One main thing that kind of stood out to me in a quick read through, was I couldn’t figure out what age the characters were supposed to be. At first I thought they were grown men, but as I kept reading I figured they were probably supposed to be younger…
Anyway, other than that confusion, I very much enjoyed the story. It made me feel something, so it will probably stick with me for a while. 🙂












