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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Valencia:
“Hi! I hope I didn’t take anyone’s seat. Do any of you know where the waiter is? I’m thirsty.” I look down at a red haired boy in the strangest clothes I’d ever seen. I tilt my head, then smile halfheartedly.
“I don’t know about a waiter, but I might have some water.” I root through my messenger bag, shoving aside pens and snacks until I grasp the bronze flask. I unscrew the lid and squint inside – it’s only about halfway full, so I’ll have to use it sparingly.
I scan the crowd for Kit’s cotton candy hair. He’s got a flask too, but I’m pretty sure it’s filled with something a bit stronger. I wonder if he’s got any water…
I’m pretty sure he left it in the car, anyways.
I sigh, and grab the wine glass near the boy’s plate, filling it about a third of the way.
“Here you go. Don’t spill it, ’cause I don’t have much left.” That sounded kind of blunt. I smile down at him as he takes the glass, a worthless attempt to smooth the edge off that statement. I shift uncomfortably, mind racing in a desperate search for some other solution – more hollow small talk to plaster over the apparent gap in my etiquette.
“What’s your name?” I tilt the inflection in a cheerful, inquisitive question. It always feels so plastic and artificial, but I think it makes people like me more. Regardless of what I feel, I hope it made him feel more welcomed.
He is just a kid, after all, and he’s all alone here. And it’s not like I really have anyone to talk to either – I’m not about to wade through that sea of strangers just to bicker with Kit again.
@inkhorn I’m interested to see Conroy’s response!










