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Wow. That’s a lot to handle.

I really liked to situational irony and Mara having no idea what was going on. But also BRENNAN SHOULD HAVE TOLD HER WHAT WAS UP. (I mean, not really that would have destroyed the conflict but… I wanted him too.) I do wonder why he didn’t, though. Was he injured doing something he shouldn’t have been doing? And also, I’d like to know (maybe not right away) what the actual injury is so that I understand the stakes better.

The dialogue was smooth too, and I felt like I could see the EMTs moving around even though they were only reference a couple times. Nice job!