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  • Beth Darlene replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago

    It feels a little too convenient that McCain would just happen to pick Jered up as he’s going to his cousin’s house and then that he knows about Ninjanaria too. I would suggest introducing us earlier on to McCain so that it doesn’t feel too convenient for him to be here at this time.

    I should write a prologue!!! Another prologue!

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