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Allison Grace replied to the topic The Fifth Test: October Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@karthmin *bites lip* I really appreciate your honesty about needing more work! I know I did some editing, but I didn’t do anything super drastic.
1. Yeah… I could make it faster. And I typically don’t write with a theme in mind, I just “let it show up.” *grimaces* I struggle writing with theme in mind. Is that the wrong way to view theme?
2. And that would probably be because this was originally typed in a Word doc and I copy and pasted it into a Google Doc. *facepalm* Now I just gotta figure out how to get my novel into a Google Doc without ruining the formatting…
3. And here’s me, who loves talking about backstory neglecting to put it in her short story. *facepalm* I will definitely add some!
Thank you so much for this! I really appreciate it!
Random statement, but I live in Ohio too! About an hour away from Akron. 😀












