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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Sep 2023 01:00:30 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks a bunch!</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 08 Sep 2023 16:20:00 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;d love to join, but unfortunately, I&#8217;ve got to wait until I&#8217;m eighteen . . . See y&#8217;all in a couple months&#x1f643;!</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Sep 2023 13:56:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kianda</p>
<p>The climb up the ladder did not last long. Kianda felt a draft of warm air curling around her, and then she was pulling herself up into a pitch black room where the strange music reverberated off the walls.</p>
<p>Over the music, a deep, slightly familiar voice growled, &#8220;By all four Dragons and eighteen Winds, not <em>this</em> again.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;Goya?&#8221; she&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105063"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/35/#post-158259" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 01 Sep 2023 00:58:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heeyyy! Late is the order of the day, it seems. I had good intentions of replying right away, but events conspired against me and here I am, two days later.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>The sand in the Ring would be hot tomorrow, but for now, the air outside was bitingly cold as always. Kianda reveled in the fierce wind, hardly noticing that the metal beneath her was so&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105052"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/35/#post-158225" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2/page/78/#post-158221</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 31 Aug 2023 00:00:32 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Probably in reply to the announcement.</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 30 Aug 2023 01:24:00 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We should write an appeal. And get the whole Story Embers community to sign it.</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 29 Aug 2023 01:38:00 -0400</pubDate>

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<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/this-is-not-an-alien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@this-is-not-an-alien</a></p>
<p>I am crying vicariously through your crying emojis. They just about sum up the situation. Though it&#8217;s too bad there isn&#8217;t an angry sobbing emoji. We need about fifty of those.</p>
<p>You have a website? That&#8217;s pretty cool! I&#8217;m totally up for relocating, but I don&#8217;t currently&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105033"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2/page/78/#post-158210" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 29 Aug 2023 01:16:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, did you guys see the forum announcement?</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/ragnarok/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ragnarok</a>, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/hannahrenner/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannahrenner</a>, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/this-is-not-an-alien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@this-is-not-an-alien</a>, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kimlikesart/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kimlikesart</a>, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/reveriewriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@reveriewriter</a></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/35/#post-158160</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Aug 2023 13:47:53 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>As a newcomer, I am not averse to wandering around in other people’s worlds and having half the characters be children. On the other hand, I also don’t mind starting over (and I have no idea what the other plans were), so…</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 23 Aug 2023 15:52:21 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>No problem! You should see how bad I am about answering emails&#x1f643;.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><strong>Kianda</strong></p>
<p>The fact that people kept tumbling out of thin air should not have been terribly surprising to Kianda, considering the circumstances. It certainly put her on edge though. Beside her, Goya cursed and whirled to face the newcomers. If things kept on in this&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105013"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/35/#post-158158" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 23 Aug 2023 12:43:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, and I have no idea whether I would want to get it published. If it&#8217;s good enough, it&#8217;d be cool to get it traditional published, but we shall see. Do you have plans/dreams for publishing?</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 23 Aug 2023 01:23:49 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I remember reading City of Ember! It was fun; I really enjoyed it, but it&#8217;s been a while. Maybe I should read it again. I think sometimes I read too much lol. I am currently reading an Amelia Peabody; a mystery series about this woman who&#8217;s an Egyptologist and somehow, there always manages to be a murder in her vicinity. She&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105011"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-22/page/2/#post-158155" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 21 Aug 2023 23:43:33 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Agatha Christie is a lot of fun! I think one of my favorites by her is the Secret Adversary, though I haven&#8217;t read it in a while. I recently read Curtain: Poirot&#8217;s last case, and I can&#8217;t decide what I think about that. The last book in a series is always kind of sad. Some of my other favorite authors/books are Brandon Sanderson,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105007"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-22/#post-158153" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 21 Aug 2023 16:21:54 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Your world sounds pretty cool! I&#8217;m afraid I&#8217;m generally not very good at world building. When I started writing, I was mildly obsessed with winged beings, so I wrote some about that. Also elemental magic. I&#8217;d enjoyed stories involving teams of kids, all with different strengths, so I used that quite a bit. The result was a story&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105003"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-22/#post-158151" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 19 Aug 2023 14:55:09 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi Zee! I&#8217;m Lydia. I love writing, reading, and music. Unfortunately, I cannot do art, but I greatly admire those who can. When did you start writing? I started when I was twelve because I also daydream a ton, and I couldn&#8217;t focus on school because of it. Writing helped me live a little more in &#8216;the real world&#8217;. Is there an author&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104990"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-22/#post-158139" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Aug 2023 14:16:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Goya cursed as he tumbled into the void, struggling with all his might against the hands that grasped his wrists. Then the darkness spat them all out again, and Goya landed hard on something that squirmed.</p>
<p>&#8220;Ow,&#8221; it said.</p>
<p>In a flash, Goya was on his feet again. Ignoring the boy he&#8217;d nearly crushed, he looked around to see the kid from earlier&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104982"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/34/#post-158133" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 14 Aug 2023 14:08:37 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Abrielle posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 13 Aug 2023 19:01:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rae</a><br />
No problem! I took english 101 last year, and while it was boring in the extreme, hey! I kind of understand sentences better now!</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 12 Aug 2023 14:58:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oops, forgot to post a bio of Kianda.</p>
<p>Age: 28</p>
<p>Appearance: Tall, grey eyes, keeps her curly blond hair in a buzz cut (she lives in a rather hostile environment and considers long hair a liability &#8211; hence her designation of Goya&#8217;s hair &#8216;absurd&#8217;).</p>
<p>Personality: Serious, though she can be quite sarcastic. Willing to work with people and be&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104961"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2/page/77/#post-158101" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 12 Aug 2023 14:25:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Is this for Guardian Angels? I can do that, if you want. </p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Aug 2023 17:36:59 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>If it&#8217;s in line with your plans, I thought it might be convenient for the portal to drop everyone on Nathair. Poor guy&#8217;s about to die of boredom.&#x1f643;</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Aug 2023 17:33:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;You better come with us so you don’t get killed!!!!!!!” the child shouted.</p>
<p>Goya was certainly not inclined to follow the two strange and utterly unhelpful maze dwellers through their whirling vortex of darkness. However, the skeleton flung itself at him, and while he wrestled with it for control of his knives, the spider succeeded in squ&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104952"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/34/#post-158098" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Aug 2023 16:00:54 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/93imperatorpenguin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@93imperatorpenguin</a><br />
No problem!<br />
Okay, your idea to switch out Ewoks with Mandalorians is brilliant! I love it. And it does seem a good idea to cut the extra super weapons. They get a little repetitive. Do you think you&#8217;d ever rewrite the other trilogies? The new one especially could use some serious help.&#x1f643;</p>
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I have Aspergers.
I like playing video games and watching cartoons.
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 27 Jul 2023 14:13:32 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I just finished the last Mistborn book! It was so much fun! Brandon Sanderson is an evil author though. Especially with that one character at the end of the first book. I was very mad about that. Also kind of impressed, because what author makes a character that good and then actually goes through with killing them? I get so&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104933"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-there-11/#post-158084" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 27 Jul 2023 12:57:49 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks for the rundown! *Awkwardly returns hug*</p>
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<p>As Goya walked through the opening, he heard a hissing, slithering sound from behind. Spinning, he found that the moss had grown over the opening until there was no way back. He felt a brief pang of apprehension, and it occurred to him to wonder whether the Wind was not&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104932"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/34/#post-158083" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic How do you decide whether to continue with an old project or start a new one? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Jul 2023 01:48:00 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi Michaela! For me, I generally have several stories simmering in the background, but I can only really focus on one (maybe two, if one is fanfiction. Those tend to require less work). What I do (or, what I&#8217;d like to be doing) is have one project that I&#8217;m writing beginning to end. If I have a sudden burst of inspiration for something&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104923"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-decide-whether-to-continue-with-an-old-project-or-start-a-new-one/#post-158077" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 23 Jul 2023 19:40:57 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Can I take this as a personal invitation? Hi! I&#8217;m Lydia. We wouldn&#8217;t want you to go nuts on account of limited social interaction, now, would we.</p>
<p>Meet Goya! My villain. He&#8217;s a nobleman from a minor house who has gained a great deal of power through doing what no one else would dare. His country recently went through a revolution&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104918"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-5/page/34/#post-158074" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hello Everybody! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Jul 2023 22:32:38 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi Emily! I’m Lydia. I’m going into my senior year in high school. What are you majoring in? Have you got a favorite author?</p>
<p>I am not particularly artsy, but I’ve a great respect for those who are. I do love color, so I enjoy embroidery. Music is lots of fun! Do you play an instrument? Have you got any favorite artists or albums&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104910"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-everybody-2/#post-158057" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jul 2023 23:37:49 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Clown? Court Jester? Some other kind of tradesmen that Igua regards as utterly useless? Merman? Bear? &#x1f643;&#x1f937;&#x200d;&#x2640;&#xfe0f;</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Jul 2023 14:55:11 -0400</pubDate>

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Basically, Lord Castle booms the ultimatum (give up your most prized possession or participate in the fashion show) so that Igua has a vague idea of what’s going on. Assuming he participates, you need to come up with something hilarious for him to wear. He must then go down the catwalk (whether he does that willingly or under Lord C&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104897"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-0/page/190/#post-158046" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jul 2023 15:11:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alpha doesn&#8217;t really have to break down and cry. Neither does Grathmere. They just both need to decide that it&#8217;s not a good idea to kill each other right now. That doesn&#8217;t mean the relationship is going to be completely healed on the spot, but it can at least open the way for it to begin.<br />
Yeah, that last idea works. But if you don&#8217;t like it . . .&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104893"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104806/#acomment-104893" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Jul 2023 14:42:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My mom thinks a prophet should show up at the final duel and preach forgiveness. Or all three should die.<br />
Anyways&#8230; So, did Grathmere accidently give Alpha the disease or was that on purpose? I get that Leahae is a sweet person and all, but if her brother kills Grathmere when she was just beginning to get to know him, it would probably cause&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104890"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104806/#acomment-104890" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 11 Jul 2023 17:10:40 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;You’re not the first person to want to know what his father’s last words are! I purposefully omitted them from the text in that one spot since in a later scene that you will have to wait until Chapter 23 for, he tells someone those words&#8230;&#8221;<br />
Figured. Nuts, what an evil author thing to do&#x1f643;.  &#8220;Here&#8217;s an interesting tidbit . . . just kidding! Now&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104870"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104856/#acomment-104870" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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Hi! I&#8217;ve finished what you&#8217;ve written so far, and it&#8217;s pretty good! It certainly doesn&#8217;t drag, which is great. I think the biggest thing I have is that you tend to be a little wordy. [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 11 Jul 2023 00:38:05 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>That would do it! Are y&#8217;all moving, like, across the country, or are you staying in the area? Are you excited about it? I hope that goes smoothly for you!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rae</a></p>
<p>Welcome to the character castle! Igua must now either give up his most prized possession or take part in the fashion show. After which, Rhianna is trying to run a rebellion&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104869"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-0/page/189/#post-158021" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle posted an update: @rae 
Hi! I&#039;ve finished what you&#039;ve written so far, and [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 08 Jul 2023 00:28:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rae</a><br />
Hi! I&#8217;ve finished what you&#8217;ve written so far, and it&#8217;s pretty good! It certainly doesn&#8217;t drag, which is great. I think the biggest thing I have is that you tend to be a little wordy. Particularly with trying to throw too much information into one sentence (totally understandable, it&#8217;s really hard not to when you&#8217;re trying to introduce&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104856"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104856/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2023 18:50:55 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Aha.&#x1f642; Yes, please!</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2023 17:54:59 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hello! Nice to meet you! Is Yarrow new to the castle?</p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2023 15:49:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rhianna</p>
<p>The stairway felt interminably long, but Rhianna was determined not to stop. Being a Loki meant that she did not tire quickly. Still, her legs had begun to ache by the time she reached a landing and a door. Heart pounding with anticipation, Rhianna flung open the door and found herself blinking in bright sunlight. As her vision adjusted,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104846"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-0/page/189/#post-158009" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic What is literary fiction? Is anyone writing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2023 14:52:24 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;d never heard of literary fiction before, but the definition I found on the web says that it is character driven instead of plot driven, which sounds so cool! I recently wrote something that was kind of like that (although it was also kind of sci-fi) and I&#8217;d love to write more in that genre. Have you got something you&#8217;re working on&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104844"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/what-is-literary-fiction-is-anyone-writing-it/#post-158008" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle joined the group Poets</title>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2023 15:45:44 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi Olivia! I&#8217;m Lydia, I&#8217;m relatively new here. What is the Witche&#8217;s Owl about? I have a couple stories in the works, one fantasy and one sci-fi. I&#8217;m very torn about which one to focus on. Have you finished any novels before? I&#8217;ve only gotten through a full draft of one, and I&#8217;m procrastinating on the revision.</p>
<p>I also love&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104838"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-there-11/#post-158005" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Teen Writers in the forum Writers of Children&#039;s/Middle Grade Books</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2023 15:02:12 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi! I&#8217;m Lydia, I&#8217;m currently seventeen. Do you have a current project? At the moment, I&#8217;m torn between a couple things; a sci-fi and a fantasy, both somewhere in the YA/children&#8217;s area. What&#8217;s your favorite part about writing? For me, I really love my characters. It&#8217;s so much fun playing around with them, watching how they interact, and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104837"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/writers-of-childrens-middle-grade-books/forum/topic/teen-writers/#post-158004" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2023 12:53:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cool! Well, my email is <a href="mailto:globetrotter12406@gmail.com" rel="nofollow ugc">globetrotter12406@gmail.com</a>. Question, are you looking for feedback? If you are, what kind of feedback? </p>
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				<title>Abrielle started the topic Short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2023 01:10:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi guys! I recently finished a short story (though it is technically a little long for a &#8216;short story&#8217;). I was wondering, would anybody be willing to give me feedback on it? If your willing to read it but don&#8217;t have time for in-depth criticism, my big question is, is it worth turning into a full length novel?</p>
<p>Well, here goes.</p>
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<p>Crow</p>
<p>The&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104833"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/sci-fi-writers/forum/topic/short-story-6/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle started the topic Short story in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2023 01:07:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi guys! I recently finished a short story (though it is technically a little long for a &#8216;short story&#8217;). I was wondering, would anybody be willing to give me feedback on it? If your willing to read it but don&#8217;t have time for in-depth criticism, my big question is, is it worth turning into a full length novel?</p>
<p>Well, here goes.</p>
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<p><strong>Crow</strong></p>
<p>The&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104832"><a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/short-story-5/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Characters who are causing headaches right now. Help! in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2023 19:42:40 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi. I’d write with advice about Nahim, but I honestly don’t know the answer. However, I still wanted to reply, if only to let you know that people hear. So . . . I wrote this. Also, I know it doesn’t convey the half of the comfort you need, but I’m so sorry about your Grandmother.</p>
<p>When I was younger, my family lived in China. We were mission&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104830"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/characters-who-are-causing-headaches-right-now-help/#post-157999" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle replied to the topic Hi! I&#039;m new! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2023 18:37:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/goat-lover/' rel="nofollow ugc">@goat-lover</a></p>
<p>Hi! I&#8217;m Lydia. Is this your very first story? What&#8217;s it about? How far have you gotten in writing it? I&#8217;ve been writing for about five years now, but I only recently finished my first full length story, a kids book about djinn triplets who attempt to kidnap a princess. All four wind up getting lost in the desert and must find their&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104829"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-im-new-3/#post-157998" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abrielle posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2023 18:04:38 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sure! Is it your complete first draft? Do you need my email? Thanks for asking! I look forward to reading it!</p>
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				<title>Abrielle posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 04 Jul 2023 17:58:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fun! I like. </p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/rae/" rel="nofollow ugc">RAE</a> posted an update in the group <a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/sci-fi-writers/" rel="nofollow ugc">Sci-fi Writers</a> 13th Birthday Sabotage
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Nahim Nayhelm was today twenty-one. The Laxorian landscape of tall grasslands was filled with armored Realn as they prepared [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>Abrielle posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 04 Jul 2023 17:56:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi RAE! I have returned. I shall now proceed to pepper you with suggestions good, bad, and downright awesome. (Teasing. I promise I don&#8217;t actually talk like this in real life.)<br />
Anyways, about Grathmere. There&#8217;s always the standard &#8216;badguy turns good, saves goodguy, and dies&#8217; trope. However, I&#8217;m not sure that this trope would really make much of a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104824"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104806/#acomment-104824" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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