Thanks to everyone who courageously shared their work with us! We received entries that were whimsical as well as touching, in a wide range of styles and lengths. After many hours of reading and rating each poem, Daeus and Cindy made their decisions. The results were close, because they saw potential in several of the pieces, and we hope that will encourage you to compete in future contests. For now, however, please join us in extending congratulations to the finalists!
“Epiphany” by Natalie Davis
Our prayers aren’t prayers;
They’re pleas for our sanity.
A groping appeal
To some far-off Trinity—
Not true religion—
Self-absorbed Christianity.
We tread the worn paths
Of our self-made soul-cages,
Claw at the bars,
Desperate for change,
Then fizzle out, dead,
And we’re still the same.
Our hearts are like ice.
There’s barely a beat
Beneath the cold crust,
And you can’t feel the heat
In our souls any longer—
We’re dead, obsolete.
We’ve fallen asleep
To some gray lullaby,
Crooned by a world
Where hope’s just a lie,
Where truth isn’t truth;
It’s a fad that has died.
Bombard our foundations,
Let us tremble and break,
Then rebuild us, new,
And help us forsake
Our desperate lie that
Sleep means escape.
Meet the Author
Amongst a wild jungle of books, half-empty coffee cups, and insane kittens, you can find the young writer Natalie Davis typing furiously at her laptop. She loves crafting stories with rich themes and real characters—no matter how many millions of hours it might take her. She specializes in both fantasy and contemporary stories, as well as poetry. She’s written several short stories, gotten poetry published on the Story Embers blog, and her current novel-in-progress is a fairy-tale retelling.
Second Place: “Burden of Proof” by JL McCarthy
Evidence is all around me.
I experience miracles daily,
yet why does my head play dead?
Like there is some other game
outside of this bubble
and I am stuck
shaking inside a globe
filled with icy snow
and fragments of life.
It all makes so much sense
that it doesn’t
make sense. These flickers
of light. Fireflies meet
my hand, and I put them
in a jar to remember
what is truly magical.
But the spark dies and is soon
forgotten. “Until next time, friends,”
I say. They don’t say anything
in response because they are
gone. Back to the forest to
hide in plain sight while I try
to recall who I am,
who He is. Like forcing
a mountain into a valley.
I grasp onto the rod, or
maybe it’s a staff, and leave
footprints in the sand that were
never mine to begin with.
They are His feet, His arms, His hands.
“Be strong,” He tells me.
“Keep going,” He prods.
“Until you see daylight.”
And I do. Because I want
to see Him. But the burden
of proof still remains on me.
Well, today anyway.
Meet the Author
JL McCarthy is a Colorado-based author, blogger, poet, wife, mother, and, above all else, a devoted follower of Jesus. Her passion for writing began as a young girl but never turned into much of anything until recently. Her children inspired her to write and publish three children’s books. JL loves encouraging others to see God in new, imaginative ways through creative writing and storytelling.
In addition to her fictional work, her blog, Centered Seconds, focuses on combining poetry and short devotionals to help her readers pause for a few moments and center on God. You can find out more about her on her website or you can follow her on Instagram and Facebook.
Honorable Mentions
“Fighting for Freedom” by Evelyne Holland
“Daisies for Goodbye” by Megan Smith
Brianna Storm Hilvety has been a professional editor for seven years, a writer for more than a decade, and a bibliophile from the moment she pronounced her first syllable. Although she began as a writer, her penchant for noticing typos and obsession with syntax compelled her to wield a red pen rather than a black one. She loves aiding writers in achieving their aspirations to captivate and change the world through fiction. Interacting with these passionate, brave souls bolsters her belief that even the quietest whisper or the tiniest mark on a page can bring comfort, conviction, and cheer to others.
Congratulations!! Both poems were so lovely, and I love the imagery.
And Tallie—this is gorgeous, so so proud of you!! And excited for your fairytale retelling … 😉
Thank you so much! ❤️
Congratulations, Natalie! You did a fantastic job.
Wow! Congratulations to both the winners! Amazing imagery in both.
And, thank you to everyone at Story Ember for putting this contest on. It was so encouraging to see my name up there! 😊
I was wondering if I’m allowed to post “Daisies for Goodbye” on my social media now?
Aww, I’m glad that the honorable mention brightened your day! And yes, you’re free to post your poem anywhere you like since we didn’t acquire it for publication. 🙂
Congratulations, everyone! Fantastic job!