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“DON’T GET SO CLOSE!!! WATCH HIM DANG IT HE WAS HIRED TO KILL YOU AND THAT MEANS HE’S GOOD AT IT!!!! DON’T YOU HURT MY CINNAMON ROLL OR I’LL SHOOT YOU THROUGH THE FOURTH WALL JAKE!!!”

I love it! XD

You actually noticed a lot about the characters I didn’t even know was there 😂. I once saw a meme about how authors will accidentally write stuff with a lot of symbolism etc. and not even know it’s there until someone points it out… makes me wonder how authors of classics would react to people analyzing their works today.

Also, I’m gonna post Part 2 for critique fairly soon (after i make a few changes story wise), but when i say rough draft, it’s a VERY rough draft unlike this WAY more polished story.

I do plan on reconciling Jake and Marian and hinting at the possibility that they might get back together, because Jake is still somewhat attracted to her and upset that their past relationship crumpled. He resents her for being the one to cut it off — but he still really cares about her and likes her.

Thank you for your feedback! It’s much appreciated!