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Julia replied to the topic Plot line for Milligard story, tell me what you think! in the forum Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@wishingwell13 I have an Alex in my story as well, and kidnapped people! 😃
Okay, so I’ll just throw out some questions for you to answer for your story with yourself. Some of them may be hard, but I promise, it’s the ones that are the hardest that give the best answers when you finally get it. 😉 (Personal experience haha)
- I’m interested in the history; how did most of the people become half elf and half human?
- Are Jaydon and Corenth royalty? (Sorry, you said he becomes king, but I’m still not sure 😂)
- From the sounds of it, the villain is trying to take over the kingdom, if he’s attacking and there’ll be a battle. So maybe kidnapping Corenth was a part of his mastermind plot? He is the heir, I believe you said, because Jaydon had to replace him.
- Do Alex and Kite know the princes? Or do they kind of have a separate story from them that ties into the war?
- Where are Jaydon and Corenth’s parents? Were they killed? Have an accident?
- What kind of time period is this set in? Is there futuristic stuff or electricity? Or does everybody ride on horses?
- Are there fantasy creatures in it?
- Is there another minor villain hiding in the shadows, also trying to take the throne while everything is weakening during the war? (if the first one is trying to do that, I mean)
I hope those help! If you need more, I can always think of more. 😉












