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Rainy Emily replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
Heck, girl! I feel that all the time. 😆 When you have no idea what might come next!
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Erin kept her gaze down as Ehud approached. She could tell he was worried. She didn’t want that.
“I’m not a heartless killing machine, Ehud!” She burst. Why did she say that? That sounded weird… “I’m just a human who’s lost so much that all I’ve gained hasn’t made up for my losses…”
Ehud’s expression seemed to say, Oh! Um…okay. Your point?
“My point is…all I want to do is go home.” Erin drew herself to her full height, which was hardly five foot, and looked Ehud in the eye.
“I’ll help you get home, if you help me get home.” She stated.
She needed to get home first. She couldn’t help Ehud without her crew, weapons arsenal, starship, and shuttlecrafts.
Hold on, what time frame was she in? Erin lived in 3035. Who knows when Ehud came from!
Nevertheless, she would still try. She looked hopefully at Ehud. What was she getting herself into.
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I think the scene should change soon and everyone’s suddenly on there own in the jungle and is confronted by their worst fear for a few minutes before getting teleported to…the castle roof?
Idk? What does everyone think?












