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Candide started the topic A poem in need of critics in the forum Rillumen’s Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
2 Corinthians 3,17
the democrat doesn’t save, the democrat waters
the republican doesn’t save, the republican waters
the flesh doesn’t save, the flesh waters
the unaffection doesn’t save, the marijuana waters
Invisible hands guide mine trough a tango
I light a candle with sight as in a mirror.
I’m given wings, I’m a bird
in peace I lay on the wind.
Comments: I’m not sure about “waters”. I would like to express “felling hungry” in an only word. Any sugestion?
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