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  • WolverineRM replied to the topic You asked… 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago

    @claire-h

    Okay, I don’t have the time rn to go through it in-depth, but I sat down to read it over, and it’s captivating!! I love Jean’s personality shining through. Something to bear in mind—you definitely don’t have to spill it in the first chapter, just for future reference—I’m curious how old they are, and what their situations are that they’re both living off on their own like this, if that makes sense. Obviously there’s a little backstory being trickled in about Jean’s family… 😉

    And gotta admit, I love that it ends on a cliffhanger… I’m obsessed with cliffhangers even though I pretend to hate them 😝

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