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Thank you for tagging me in this 🙂 Here are some ideas (some of these may have already been mentioned):

• These characters often show, rather than tell,  how much they care. They could sacrifice themselves. Have them secretly perform an act of kindness or faithfully watch out for someone without saying a word.
• Microexpressions. Stiffened posture.  Slight pauses after being asked about a certain person/topic. Changes in vocal tone (“fake” laugh, different pitch, forced vocal control, etc.).  Tightening the grip on the steering wheel. Eyes that widen a few centimeters while the rest of the face remains stone-cold. Subtle winces or nervous tics that other characters barely notice. The little tells they give when they think no one’s watching or paying attention. Or maybe BIG tells, such as being all tough-and-grumpy when they’re with others but crying or throwing things as soon as everyone leaves the room.
• Sarcasm, jokes, sighs, & passive-aggression.
• Have them let their guard down for a moment with a particular character. In this vulnerable scene, they share a bit more of themselves, whether verbally or nonverbally.
• Physical signs of certain emotions: paleness, quickened breathing, sweaty palms. Accidently dropping something or tripping when a certain topic/person is mentioned.

I think the reason why seemingly-unemotional characters’ emotions seem more powerful is because of contrast. Their feelings stand out because it’s so rare, and it shows how even the most (outwardly) cold hearts can change.