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Kayla Joy started the topic Candy Cane Killer Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
This is not the whole Chapter 1. I want to see what everyone thinks about how I introduced my MC before I give the rest.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bCayT72w2WTRtieFyio8a_DpbloKabRFvO8tz7aRpNc/edit?usp=sharing












