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Emma Starr replied to the topic To Talk of things… in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@w-o-holmes Cool! 🙂
Coming back fresh, I actually really like that line. I think you should keep it!
Also, maybe what makes it a bit confusing for me is a couple of words like “wherewith” are not what I’m used to, so it’s harder to process the meaning of the poem.












