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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MmOnO5o_VIMUm4TNOuZSZ-lbsC5E8ONKYrj9753F4Jk/edit?usp=drivesdk

I hereby hand this story over to the Knaplingers for any and all forms of critiquing, criticisms, and other forms of ripping apart, in the knowledge that it’s still way too long and has a couple problems I know about, not to mention the ones I don’t know about yet. Also in the knowledge that we might use Katherine’s instead, which I thought was good and not too predictable, but foreshadowed enough.

Have at it, guys!