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@literatureforthelight

Thank you so much for reviewing my story! I’m really glad that it encouraged you, I wrote it as a reminder to myself that God is our hope amid this dark culture. Knowing that you were encouraged by it, encourages me by showing that the story is doing its job. 🙂 Despite my trouble with grammar.

I think I fixed the view only setting this morning, but I’m not sure. I did do all the corrections you suggested, although I’m still working on shortening what Pat says. I agree she says a lot and it’s hard to take in all at once, now I just have to figure out the best way to go about shortening it while still keeping the most important points. All your corrections really helped a lot! Thank you! 🙂

The occasion is one of the last few weeks with the writing tutor I was paired up with through the Young Writer’s program. I think we have five weeks left and I’m supposed to send her my final draft tomorrow. 🙂