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Rachel replied to the topic Short Story in the forum Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago
@bama-rose
Wow, thanks for all your help editing! 🙂 I looked it over and it helped a lot! There were quite a few things I didn’t catch that needed to be fixed that you caught. If I had the money I’d hire you as my editor. 🙂I’m really glad you liked the story, it’s something I’ve been struggling with to recently. There’s several people at my church who are quick to tell me everything that’s wrong with our society right now and tell me things are going to get much worse. It depresses me, but I have to keep reminding myself that God is our hope. And that He has a plan. 🙂












