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JennytheFaun replied to the topic Concerning a Shortish Story and a Longish Story in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Lol yes, that’s so true!
@maddie-jay
Agh, those typos! Always so much easier to spot in other people’s writing… 😛 Yeah, POV switches are something I use way too much. I like getting different perspectives on the story, but I understand that the story feels choppy and confusing if it gets inside too many characters’ heads. XD I agree. Poor guy.
Thanks! I hope you enjoy my book too!












