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@jennythefaun

i finished your short story! Wow, it was cool. The opening scene had me shivering, and I was really surprised by where you took the story. Critique wise, I don’t have much. There were a couple typos, and in a few spots there was head hopping between characters, when I think it could have been conveyed from one single point of view. But other than that I have no complaints. Actually, yes I do. I wanted Hagan to liiiiivvvvveeeee!! Poor fellow.

Ill add your book to my TBR list.