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Donna Darling replied to the topic A (Short) Story Of Mine in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@i-david Ahhhhhh this is all so beautiful!! You are so good at evoking emotions David!
I can’t really think of anything to critique, except that the bit where he’s (or she’s) describing the obects she left behind feels a bit awkward? Idk how to explain it. ;v;










