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  • KR LaLonde replied to the topic Long Talks About Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago

    It came about suddenly. No one suspected it. No one suspected him. And before we had opportunity to defend ourselves against his plan, we lost the battle.

    Being a small town with a big heart, we were entirely too open and welcoming to most. We [welcomed] even the most cantankerous of fellows. It turned into a miraculous blessing for everyone involved.

    We hoped to see a repetition of our [good fortune].

    I wasn’t certain about good fortune in a Christian story/book. Brackets usually mark where I want to look up possible replacement words. *Thesaurus*

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