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A Kitchen Sink replied to the topic Long Talks About Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@libby I read your story and it was amazing! Really well done, great imagery. If I could leave one little critique… you describe the girl/fairy as being “lucid” or appealing, so I didn’t realize the main/pov character was a girl until the end, and it was a bit confusing. But maybe that’s just me.
@ashira Thank you!












