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Hey look, thoughts and things!  (Very helpful, thank you very much.  I love all reader thoughts.  I wanted a detail for the cube and a wilted plan is perfect, so thanks a lot.)

I’m totally open to any other thoughts you want to share, be they really small nit-picky things or broad strokes type critiques.

ALSO FUN FACT: today I was at a writer’s conference here in my hometown and TOSCA LEE looked over and critiqued this excerpt.  It was amazing.  Shout out to her.