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Usually what I do is find one of Audrey’s posts and just copy/paste the whole lump of tags.

-Emotion. Yeah, I could definitely feel Madylen’s emotions inside of her. I think that if I knew more of the backstory I would also become very emotional. I was starting to, to be honest.

-Tenses. The Emily Cunningham person has already fixed most of them, so reading through wasn’t too bad for me. I once did that with present/past tenses too, now that I think about it….but tenses are easily fixable.

-Understanding. I had no idea what the setting was, except for when you dropped that line about the Echo Watch. I would have guessed WWII, but then again, maybe it’s a future war. Maybe provide a little backstory? But since this is about how Madelyn feels, so backstory isn’t really that necessary.

Okay, I think that’s it. Great job, File!