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Parker Hankins replied to the topic Anyone up for cheking out a (very) short story? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago

@libby, wow!! An amazing story!!! And I can’t believe you wrote a story so short!!! That’s like sooooooo hard!!!! I loved the description you used and the way you described some of the speech as dripping. The only thing I noticed was a few adverbs, but I’m not sure they could be deleted without changing the meaning. This was a great story!!!