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  • Devastate Lasting replied to the topic September Critique Piece: Broken Things in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

    @karthmin Thank you for taking the time to read and critique my writing. I’m glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for pointing out what needs to be fixed. I’ll do my best to improve my writing based on your pointers. To clear things up a bit, the woman is Death. Then again, that might not clear up anything at all. XD

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