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  • Filewriter replied to the topic Critique Me, Please. in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago

    @sarah-inkdragon, Wow! That sounds like a lot. I am sure that that will be very helpful. 🙂 Thank you! And I’m sorry for forgetting to put on the “suggesting”. I thought I did, but, honestly, I’m not that experienced with with the sharable link setting thing. So… yeah. But, I am pretty sure I fixed it. Pretty sure. At least it says I fixed it. 🙂

    @devastate-lasting, Great! Exactly! You’re like, “This is an awesome story, but all the things are so connected that I don’t know how to keep out all the important spoilers.” Very hard to do. With this I think I keep enough spoilers out, but I’m curious if it makes sense. My mom read it, and she said it makes sense, but I also talk about my book all the time, so… Oh, but she doesn’t know what Hostanica is. *evil laughter* No one knows that one. 🙂 🙂 😉

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