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  • Sarah Baran replied to the topic Critiques 1 in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago

    @christieaton My first reaction is that the “ideas” look squished. I’m not sure if that’s because they’re forced to go around the canvas even though a natural flow wouldn’t have such a hard right-angle, or if there’s genuinely not enough space between the canvas and the top of the picture, but all in all, I think there’s too much effort to keep the ideas off the canvas. To have them spilling out of it would seem more natural, instead of having them swirl around it but never overlap it.

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