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Uh..@kayla-joy…I just have a few thoughts that I hope could help with your problem. I’ve been struggling with something similar a while ago.

I’ll dare to say that nine years apart is not too stretchy for a romantic interest. I’ve known “real live couples” who are eleven years or more apart in age. And personally, I think romance adds a spice into any story that nothing else could. Take that from a girl. 🙂  Just don’t overdo it, and don’t let the lovey-dovey stuff overtake the story.  And this could actually work alongside with the mentor/trainee relationship, since he would be training her anyways, right? So, something like a mixed relationship—which makes the story more interesting.

Sound like a great idea!! I love clean, great, Christian action/mystery books. Keep it up!!

Just my two cents. 🙂