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I just realized I never replied to your comment! First of all, thank you so much for your help!!! And it is nice to meet you 🙂

I can’t say I’m super surprised the first section needs some revamping…. I think I might have revised it once… It’s pretty much the original writing from nearly five years ago… Will definitely take a look at that 🙂

Currently working on Blaine’s character. He definitely needs some help… But I am so glad that was your perception of Amelie!! I wasn’t quite sure how she would come off to others.

I am working on rewriting this scene before I post the next section, but I am curious about what you will think of the society–would definitely love some more feedback on that aspect when it comes to it 🙂 I’ll tag you when I get the next thing up! Thanks again!!