THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

*Does not stop thanking for another 10 minutes*

(But seriously thank you. Because I get stuck whenever I want to injure one of my characters because I don’t know what it will look like or how to heal them. So thank you!

So I have a character who fell maybe a couple feet of the ground and then got hit in the head by the pulley system she built and I wanted to know if A. The pulley system would break the skin.…[Read more]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

And I have a lot of research I need to do… Thank you for that as well.

The story was honestly just a concept that just floated into my brain and I was like “hmm I haven’t had a ton of motivation to write, but the story makes me feel really excited” And then I realized that I would probably have a lot of…[Read more]

So first I want to figure out how much a 16 or 17-year-old would be affected by murder and stuff. And I also want to figure out how brainwashing works. And I want to be brainwashing a six or seven-year-old. So how does murder affect…[Read more]

Answer when you have the time and thanks!

Alright I’ll post it! Warning it might not be very good.

Critique when you have the time!

Wigeon stumbled into camp. She could make out faint decorations hanging on the walls of the wide notch cliffs. Flowers, and feathers tied together on vines were hanging on any spot a cat could reach.

The faint light that emitted from…[Read more]

I don’t really mind how long chapters are and I would be willing to communicate through Google docs.

That’s where I do most of my work too.

I don’t know how long my WIP will be.

The first chapter is 900 words but I would be ecstatic if you just helped with that since it’s my first time

@jared-williams

I would also like to switch to either a website that would help with critiquing.

I think a word limit would also be a good idea too.

I will check out this other…[Read more]

Would anyone like to start a critique group?

I’m attempting to write a story about cats dealing with emotional problems.

Why cats? Because people are HARD to write especially when you have never written anything and are only really comfortable with writing cats.

I don’t really know if writing is a long term career or my higher calli…[Read more]

Would anyone like to start a critique group?

I’m attempting to write a story about cats dealing with emotional problems.

Why cats? Because people are HARD to write especially when you have never written anything and are only really comfortable with writing cats.

I don’t really know if writing is a long term career or my higher calling. I…[Read more]

So poems are very new to me. I have this poem that isn’t sitting right with me word wise. It doesn’t sound like a poem to me. Now I know nothing about poems, so any advice you could give would be oh so helpful.

Thank you for your time.

The Scar

A lush forest is blemished by this coulee

A imprudent child is at the bottom of it

That…[Read more]

Thank you for making me feel welcomed, and I will definitely try to @ you at any poetry I do post!

Thank you for making me feel welcome on the forums! I feel excited to write, and maybe share with everyone here.

Have a good day, Rose!!

Alright I didn’t know that. That’s really cool.

I got sucked in thanks to some friends of mine. I’ve read all four and it was a good ending.

What’s the YA side of things, and what’s YA in general?

Um I really like Andrew Peterson and the Wing feather Saga. I can’t remember anything else off the top of my head. I will get back to you.

I want to say I started in 2019. 2020, some very drastic things happened. My private Christian middle school turned to virtual, my two boxers died, and, of course, COVID. Late 2021 I got a poem idea and have been trying to figure that out. I’m terrified of posting what I have here.…[Read more]

(I think it’s been a year?) I don’t remember.

I’m very new to forums and would like help learning about writing and poetry.

So uh hi!