Story Embers | A. D. S. | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/ads_forest/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning A. D. S.. Tue, 14 Apr 2026 00:40:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 07ce4cb861655bcacdf5d17c81590ccc Lin replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/posting-my-art-for-the-first-time/#post-86702 Tue, 16 Apr 2019 21:00:03 -0400 @ads_forest Can’t wait to see more of your work! 🙂

@the-fledgling-artist Why thank you miss Fledge! The same should be said about you. I loooovee your art style! 🙂

]]> 0 912d48adad2ef09af6465f6e89388c89 Lin replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/posting-my-art-for-the-first-time/#post-86549 Mon, 15 Apr 2019 19:59:10 -0400 @ads_forest Hi there! Your drawings look pretty good, especially for a beginner! I agree with everything @the-fledgling-artist just said. Keep on drawing and you’ll start seeing the things you could improve on. 🙂

]]> 0 e07451445d2fef34e297fd215c809a6c The Fledgling Artist replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/posting-my-art-for-the-first-time/#post-86542 Mon, 15 Apr 2019 19:24:27 -0400 @ads_forest

Hey! For someone who’s only dipped their toes into the world of art these are very good! The first thing I notice here is that your art has a lot of emotional expression and life to it.

Unfortunately, the thing with art is that the only way to get better is to practice. Fortunately, if you want to get better, all you have to do is…[Read more]

]]> 0 99e718d41020d15f361322fee38497c3 Evelyn replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/posting-my-art-for-the-first-time/#post-86466 Mon, 15 Apr 2019 13:04:23 -0400 @ads_forest I’m not a good artist (yet xD) but I just wanted to drop in and say I love your work! Wow, those eyes and noses. Great job! 😀

]]> 0 6ec154f07cda38dbc648e7fcff529986 audrey.the.author replied to the topic New Year Resolutions! in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/new-year-resolutions/#post-69945 Mon, 07 Jan 2019 03:37:40 -0400 @ads_forest You’re welcome! I agree. Excellent! Have you decided on where you will attend college?
My availability to write depends on the quarter. I also think it would depend on the person taking the classes. Personally, I have found three classes to be excruciating, and my writing was limited to jotting down every inspirational or poetic thing…[Read more]

]]> 0 39c5a336ee2427479e84d6ecbab526e2 audrey.the.author replied to the topic New Year Resolutions! in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/new-year-resolutions/#post-69933 Mon, 07 Jan 2019 03:05:29 -0400 I have not been one to make New Year’s resolutions, and I still struggle to understand why that is the case. However, I tend to sit down before each college quarter and make some bullet journal pages about health, homework, writing, and such. This time (school starts tomorrow), I took things a little further and made several pages of focus points…[Read more]

]]> 0 a006fc81a3efb1d43eee6ed6b5558549 Introverted Elf replied to the topic Help with Good, Grabbing Plotlines in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/help-with-good-grabbing-plotlines/#post-69903 Mon, 07 Jan 2019 00:11:45 -0400 @lord-of-watermelon

Okay, thanks so much! I’ll have to try those out whenever I’m stuck on my (many) plotlines. 🙂

“Keep in mind, there’s a wide range of people who probably have the same interest in the stories and plots you do.”  Wow.  I’ve actually never thought about it that way…  But that is interesting and motivating. :D…[Read more]

]]> 0 1557cdfc1a876b5267806b006745f50c papergirlsfb replied to the topic Our Annual Theme? in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/our-annual-theme/#post-69793 Sun, 06 Jan 2019 17:56:31 -0400 @ads_forest

No idea…. I don’t even know what that is….

]]> 0 3a00c7e17a6a88af202fd368e82a4fd0 Dee-G Blueshine replied to the topic New Year Resolutions! in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/new-year-resolutions/#post-69741 Sun, 06 Jan 2019 03:54:18 -0400 @ads_forest Thanks! I’m pretty excited for it!

]]> 0 7670fcac6c1bc740950ec50015e56938 A. D. S. replied to the topic Role Play for Learning in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/role-play-for-learning/page/24/#post-67527 Fri, 21 Dec 2018 01:24:59 -0400 It’s a made up Union. It’s essentially a dystopian government and I couldn’t come up with a better name. Lol

As for where Kayto is, I think I might have misread what happened up to this point in the story.

So I’ll let you guys decide where to put him. Maybe whoever post next can clarify that.

]]> 0 4bcbf8a5011ca0ac81a78b62a22169ba Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Role Play for Learning in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/role-play-for-learning/page/24/#post-67449 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 22:10:07 -0400 ( @ads_forest

Is this Union as in your Union in a book or as in the actual Union in history? Also. Is Kayto (cool name by the way) with the twins, Scarlet and Ty or with Karra, statue Belial and Jake? )

]]> 0 c23e4afa7cbd972ad6bed2b65b722aa1 I, David replied to the topic Role Play for Learning in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/role-play-for-learning/page/24/#post-67372 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 15:07:03 -0400 ( @ads_forest I blinked in disbelief. Nice tag, though. Hans is jealous. XD

Also… Getting some strong EoME vibes from your MC.)

(Also-also, you may want to read the last 5 pages to try to catch up. Just fyi. XD)

]]> 0 7aeed14631cca40aa04ee123595550ec Kayla Joy replied to the topic Tormenting a Character in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tormenting-a-character/#post-66130 Fri, 14 Dec 2018 21:49:00 -0400 @ads_forest

Yes, my main character will learn that hurting people is not right, but not until about halfway through the book. I feel really mean for making my character go through this, but she has to in order to grow.

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