Story Embers | Adnyole | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/adnyole/activity/ Activity feed for Adnyole. Mon, 27 Apr 2026 01:55:38 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 7e1e17bdd7f762282f095c06a3b2cc23 Adnyole's profile was updated https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102975/ Sun, 11 Sep 2022 23:53:45 -0400 0 9cf9ec0bea4d47b002ea1ae8d0064f28 Adnyole replied to the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102934/ Tue, 06 Sep 2022 02:24:30 -0400 @this-is-not-an-alien Hi! Thanks so much for the response and I am sorry it has taken me this long to respond myself. I appreciate your perspective and ability to explore trauma. My goal is to have a similarity in weight to one of my favorite book series Chronicles of the Kings by Lynn Austin (highly recommend if you haven’t read it). One of the…[Read more]

]]> 0 e25ece5dfb1b90f1af3434e2571ffbd0 Adnyole replied to the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102849/ Sun, 28 Aug 2022 04:12:53 -0400 @calidris

Agreed. I really care about emotional impact in my writing on all levels.

That is actually in the story too. 😛 Lydia was intended to trigger the escape so someone from ‘her’ household raises the alarm. Ambrose takes an arrow to the shoulder and because the Kisi tribe uses arrows shaped like corkscrews, they can’t get it out, so they…[Read more]

]]> 0 31f36e236d4239df5c241eb13bee696f Adnyole replied to the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102845/ Sat, 27 Aug 2022 23:32:40 -0400 @calidris Yeah, I totally agree that Christians should be people who talk about hard topics with grace and truth, in art and in the church, etc. My audience is intended to be adults and mature young adults. Ambrose starts as a teen, but a late teen like 18/19 or so, and by the time we make it to enslavement he is likely going to be a year or two…[Read more]

]]> 0 401ebb09866e8cb223f6456a2e2192d4 Adnyole replied to the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102835/ Sat, 27 Aug 2022 05:29:36 -0400 @calidris Yoh! You just hit the nail on the head! Yeah, this is the type of advice I am looking for. I have literally been wrestling with those types of questions about the character… I definitely have the purpose in mind to show a story of restoration and redemption, definitely not out for willy-nilly here. The context is intended to be one of…[Read more]

]]> 0 732ebdc09e38ed1c4843cfd55a1c4111 Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102818/#acomment-102830 Fri, 26 Aug 2022 23:58:11 -0400 Hi, yeah I am pretty new. Thanks for the input. Yeah, she does end up having to tell him at some point before the escape and Yona would really struggle with it because of the dishonor he feels. The problem I am having is really what kind of journey to take them on together after that point where said escape takes place. How is the pair going to…[Read more]

In reply to - Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers @adnyole Hey! *waves* I haven’t been on here for probably a year, so I don’t think we’ve met. I think your […] ]]> 5a21cdf6fa622d528d3b18b85b299c03 Adnyole's profile was updated https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102828/ Fri, 26 Aug 2022 23:22:34 -0400 0 ba9152887e9747bea4c0183bc804b9bb Adnyole changed their profile picture https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102826/ Fri, 26 Aug 2022 22:38:45 -0400 0 a89d1cfa827ef5168f0a7981418d09a7 Adnyole joined the group Poets https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102809/ Fri, 26 Aug 2022 00:31:47 -0400 0 752008cc97bc3336428c4ce04b1a9dc9 Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102779/#acomment-102808 Fri, 26 Aug 2022 00:26:06 -0400 Sure thing!

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hi again! Does anyone also know if there could be a pain-killer strong […] ]]> b407f5183e5ea6371015527a44c06c9d Adnyole replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102807/ Fri, 26 Aug 2022 00:23:54 -0400 Hey, Kinda late to the party but I got some comments from the peanut gallery. I think a lot of what Christians can consume comes down to their personal freedom and their personal weaknesses. Each person needs to discern with their people and God, what they can and can’t handle. Some read LOTR, some can’t, some read Harry Potter, some adamantly…[Read more]

]]> 0 ae1ca8887b5667077f1d2b250f54e81c Adnyole started the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102804/ Thu, 25 Aug 2022 23:41:30 -0400 Hey, so I am working on an outline for a story about an African teen named Ambrose whose fictional tribe was basically anialated by rebels, and he gets caught on the edge of an explosion that scars his face which leads him to Medical personal Yona and his Irish wife Lydia “Bibi Miti”. After a series of events Ambrose, Yona and Lydia enter this…[Read more]

]]> 0 899c48f449e35bc996c44b24c93ce54d Adnyole started the topic HELPPlot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102803/ Thu, 25 Aug 2022 23:01:07 -0400 Hey, so I am working on an outline for a story about an African teen named Ambrose whose fictional tribe was basically anialated by rebels, and he gets caught on the edge of an explosion that scars his face which leads him to

]]> 0 3747a3211a82b4d8514970b3e21d1bc9 Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102777/#acomment-102802 Thu, 25 Aug 2022 22:54:25 -0400 Gee, your character is gonna need some serious therapy for all that trauma and PTSD. 🙂

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hey everyone! I was wondering if any of you would know the effects it […] ]]> c0a7d167a10e0d91850a2758286ddf33 Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102779/#acomment-102801 Thu, 25 Aug 2022 22:53:18 -0400 I don’t see why not. He could use even fentanyl if he had to (it is used in medicine sometimes). Analgesics (pain meds) basically block the pain signals in the brain or nervous system. There are tons of pain meds so that seems perfectly fine to me. Just, uh, watch your guy for physical dependence and addiction cause a fellow with that much…[Read more]

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hi again! Does anyone also know if there could be a pain-killer strong […] ]]> 9d9e71d79dbc6c2a95d27b71a23bb6d3 Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102777/#acomment-102800 Thu, 25 Aug 2022 22:43:49 -0400 Hey, no worries. So research can be as simple as google and youtube and as complex as a peer-reviewed article from a publication journal. the trick is just making sure you’ve got reliability so always look for information provided by universities, or professionals and just check those resources against each other for discrepancies. There’s lots of…[Read more]

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hey everyone! I was wondering if any of you would know the effects it […] ]]> d2b3e42bdd98a235c604dfed719f556a Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102777/#acomment-102791 Thu, 25 Aug 2022 05:02:30 -0400 Oh, and to the other questions, electrocution effects are going to depend entirely on the voltage, current, and amperage of electricity in use. It is also going to depend on the duration of direct electrical exposure. It is definitely going to affect the electrical conduction of the heart and muscles, likely causing injury over time. It is…[Read more]

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hey everyone! I was wondering if any of you would know the effects it […] ]]> 43d5f5bdf252612fdb427d5187ba2cc9 Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102777/#acomment-102789 Thu, 25 Aug 2022 04:14:37 -0400 Hi, I happen to be some studying burns in school, I am also a bit of a nerd and would love to give you a hand. First, a person can lose a limb due to fire, but most likely as the result of an amputation from burn complications such as infection, or compartment syndrome (essential circulation is cut off from the limb because the burn circles the…[Read more]

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hey everyone! I was wondering if any of you would know the effects it […] ]]> 273212bb14198dde954a8f555f6a825a Adnyole posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102779/#acomment-102788 Thu, 25 Aug 2022 03:33:28 -0400 For severe pain: opiates ie. morphine, codeine, oxycodone, hydromorphone etc. Or plain old opium if going for a more old school/medieval type approach to medicine. Mild pain: Asprin, Ibuprophen. Asprin is a derivative from certain trees, people used cocaine leaves in the past. How severe is “your pain” and what medicinal method would you like to use?

In reply to - ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers Hi again! Does anyone also know if there could be a pain-killer strong […] ]]> aa6a59e0e93e36f660b2c1c4c23169e3 Adnyole joined the group Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/102787/ Thu, 25 Aug 2022 02:52:26 -0400 0