Story Embers | Zachary Holbrook | Favorites https://storyembers.org/members/toklaham-veruzia/activity/favorites/ Activity feed of Zachary Holbrook's favorites. Thu, 30 Apr 2026 10:09:57 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 3c374a439bc5f0e89f80e6bfbce957b8 Maya Joelle posted an update: @toklaham-veruzia Hey! Just wanted to say hi. I joined SE a […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81042/ Sat, 20 Jun 2020 17:11:15 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Hey! Just wanted to say hi. I joined SE a couple days ago and found your profile somehow (I’m used to a directory of all users, since that’s how it is on YDubs…). Maddie and I have been texting but I find it a little weird to always be saying things like “does Zachary like Story Embers?” (after seeing you in the background of…[Read more]

]]> 2 fa026873c7f7ef8cd4137a82d19fc1b0 duskflower replied to the topic The Lore of Yore-- First Three Chapters in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/67276/ Mon, 21 Oct 2019 23:13:24 -0400 Hi! I wasn’t able to fit all my thoughts into the comments so I’ll finish them here.

1) I really like Keylori. It’s interesting beginning with a character who is already in a position of command. Right now, it almost seems like it’s about to be stripped from her and she’s going to have to find her identity without it. If so, that would definitel…[Read more]

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