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				<pubDate>Mon, 14 Apr 2025 20:00:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong><a href="https://storyembers.org/?p=137391" rel="nofollow ugc">Fiction and Reality Aren’t as Far Apart as You Think</a></strong><a href="https://storyembers.org/?p=137391" rel="nofollow ugc"><img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2025/04/IMG_4757.jpeg" /></a> In the midst of writing, have you ever been seized with the fear that it’s all a pointless accumulation of falsehoods? That the heart you’ve poured int <a href="https://storyembers.org/?p=137391" rel="nofollow ugc"><span>[&hellip;]</span></a></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2024 21:00:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Male authors’ bungled characterizations of women (and vice versa) is a running joke in the writing industry. The examples are often hilarious—and equally frustrating. Even the most talented authors struggle to dep [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/Recovering-harmony-between-men-and-women-in-fiction.jpg" /></p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 27 Feb 2024 00:01:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad this proved helpful for you, Dixie!  I actually have a character with a similar background &#8211; evil magic but doesn&#8217;t know it at first. It&#8217;s a fun knot to untie! Good luck with your project!</p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 17 Feb 2024 22:01:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, E. C. ! Best wishes on your trilogy!</p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 12 Feb 2024 20:00:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The final pages of an epic tale are often my favorite, holding bittersweetness that touches me deeply. The full impact of the hero’s choices are revealed, and layered beneath victory’s halo is a sense of los [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/Memory-knife.jpeg" /></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 13 Sep 2023 14:22:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Alena! </p>
<p>The Last Battle is a really incredible story, as Lewis takes us around the ring but also up, like a spiral that ends in the next level up. I think his effective use of a ring structure is definitely part of why that story has resonated for decades in even the youngest of readers. It&#8217;s one of those things that is a hallmark of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105111"><a href="https://storyembers.org/3-ways-you-can-use-mirroring-to-craft-a-resolution-that-truly-resonates/comment-page-1/#comment-12417" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Karissa!</p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Jun 2023 20:00:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong><a href="https://storyembers.org/?p=93462" rel="nofollow ugc">How to Cultivate Powerful Moments of Wonder in Storytelling, Part 2</a></strong><a href="https://storyembers.org/?p=93462" rel="nofollow ugc"><img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/07/How_to_Cultivate_Powerful_Moments_of_Wonder_in_Storytelling_Part_2.jpg" /></a> Have you ever set down a book, startled that the author turned your outlook upside down with tiny black marks on paper? Do you want to write stories that <a href="https://storyembers.org/?p=93462" rel="nofollow ugc"><span>[&hellip;]</span></a></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 13 Mar 2023 20:00:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As writers, we love exploring the internal struggles that shape our characters. During formative moments, emotional turmoil may need to take center stage, as with Thomas in Nadine Brandes’ Fawkes. Usually this s [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/11/4A890FAA-67E3-405B-A345-5DAFEF8720B3.jpeg" /></p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Sep 2022 22:00:17 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Andi! </p>
<p>It&#8217;s my hope that as more  and more Christian writers simply set out to write impactful fiction that can change people&#8217;s lives, instead of trying to stick within the artificial constraints of a genre that exists for no other reason than marketing, that some of the issues you bring up in this comment will begin to lessen. There&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102969"><a href="https://storyembers.org/4-lessons-christian-writers-can-glean-from-the-horror-genre/comment-page-1/#comment-11887" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Sep 2022 21:50:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Sarah! I&#8217;ve always felt that shy children get the short end of the stick in fiction. I suppose they don&#8217;t lend themselves very well to riveting action and things of the like, but maybe that&#8217;s just an expectation that we can change, eh?</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why, thank you!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Absolutely! It was a fun idea to tackle. </p>
<p>You&#8217;re right &#8211; it&#8217;s so easy to just create an abstract idea of what people are (or should) be like, especially when we don&#8217;t have a close personal connection to their experience and point of view. It&#8217;s always a tremendous asset to look at the people right around us for inspiration on how to make our&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102966"><a href="https://storyembers.org/3-truths-to-remember-when-crafting-child-characters/comment-page-1/#comment-11884" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 22 Aug 2022 14:00:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Imagine that, for twenty-four hours, you’re limited to the use of half your vocabulary, your awareness of interpersonal subtext dims, and all your skills and strengths revert back to level one. On top of that, y [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2022/08/Child-characters.jpg" /></p>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 21 Aug 2022 04:10:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Abigail! Worldbuilding is also a weakness of mine, but in the other direction&#8230; once I get started, I can&#8217;t stop! And then I have to pare things down more and more until I get to the details that are relevant to the story. </p>
<p>So glad you found this helpful! May it be ever at the ready for quick deployment in you future endeavors.</p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 04 Aug 2022 14:00:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>God designed humans as intricate beings, and a single culture encompasses thousands (if not millions) of individuals interacting with each other in hundreds of different combinations and relationships. Reflect on [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2022/08/Fictional-cultures.jpg" /></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Really love this advice! The real tricks of the trade right here.</p>
<p>Also, side note: It&#8217;s fascinating to hear this from someone who experiences stories so viscerally. My imagination is not very vivid, oddly enough. I tend to identify with the emotional states of characters much more strongly than I have ever experienced/identified with their&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102176"><a href="https://storyembers.org/character-goals-can-help-you-craft-descriptions-readers-will-love/comment-page-1/#comment-11761" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jul 2022 03:39:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice work! This might be the best summary of what a log line is, and how to make it, that I&#8217;ve seen in &#8211; well, long enough that I can&#8217;t remember a better one. XD </p>
<p>Also, your writing style is so robust. It&#8217;s a pleasure to read. Compliments to the chef!</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jul 2022 03:30:54 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks! I feel this so deeply. Every time I see a beautiful landscape I am baffled how I could possibly cram all that goodness into words. They feel so inadequate! But it helps to remember that our readers have a bank full of memories of the same beautiful things, and all we have to do is trigger those memories to bring the beauty into their minds. 🙂</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! </p>
<p>You&#8217;re absolutely right. Biblical meditation is about learning to align our mind with God&#8217;s. We have to still our own mental chatter to do this, but the goal is not to stay emptied, it is to be filled with the Spirit instead!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m considering attending at least one writing conference in the upcoming year, so this is good stuff to be thinking about!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love this! I&#8217;ve found this true in the past, but feel like I&#8217;ve more recently lost the skill of cultivating silence. A great and timely reminder!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Jaydyn! It&#8217;s always such a reward to hear that something I&#8217;ve written is helping light the imagination!</p>
<p>Great question! The original idea for Endbringer came from an image prompt of a golden-yellow eye with the numbers of a clock around the iris. The eye looked tired and sad to me, and the image immediately seized my imagination.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102170"><a href="https://storyembers.org/second-place-winner-endbringer/comment-page-2/#comment-11755" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Annabel! </p>
<p>Thanks so much for stopping by! I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed this article, and hope you find many more encouraging and helpful things on the Story Embers blog, both in the archives and in future articles!</p>
<p>Thanks again for your kind words,</p>
<p>Martin</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed this article, Joshua! I appreciate the time you took to share your thoughts about this! It&#8217;s a complex issue, and sometimes character death is the right choice for your story. It all depends on the story you&#8217;re trying to tell, and the consequences of that death for the rest of the cast. At the end of the day, it&#8217;s up to you&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-99338"><a href="https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-you-shouldnt-kill-your-characters/comment-page-1/#comment-11317" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad you appreciated this, Michael!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed it!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for this comment, Brian!</p>
<p>Lots of good thoughts here. Thank you taking the time to share your thought processes and what you want to see in Christian fiction. Hopefully articles like this, in additional to everything else we do at Story Embers will help trigger the kind of storytelling that you&#8217;re looking for. And who knows, maybe it&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-99335"><a href="https://storyembers.org/how-to-authentically-write-religious-characters-without-resorting-to-stereotypes/comment-page-1/#comment-11313" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh boy, I really love this one. Excellent work!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8230;I don&#8217;t even know what to say. This is incredible.</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really like that you tackled a set of characters that don&#8217;t tend to see the light of day very often. You really brought them to life in a way that I appreciated. Nice work!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love this story! Your writing has a clean, simple style. I really loved the car-themed metaphors you slipped in every now and then &#8211; it really helped immerse me in the character&#8217;s way of thinking about the world.</p>
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London, 1928

 

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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>@</strong>daeus-lamb Oh neat! I read Unfinished Tales so long ago that the details are pretty fuzzy. Good catch!</p>
<p>I wonder if one could make a case that Eol&#8217;s wife is a negative example as well. I&#8217;m having a hard time remembering the exact details of that situation&#8230; was all the bad on Eol&#8217;s shoulders?</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The differences between Lewis and Tolkien, with specific regard to the thematic presentation of women in their fiction, is something that has fascinated me as soon as the comparison popped into my head. That initial premise was followed to an analysis of their works that I found quite interesting. I&#8217;m curious to hear all of your thoughts on this&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-98889"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/98889/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Rachel! I hope you&#8217;re able to put it to some use in your writing life. God bless!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for your kind words, Brian! Very encouraging. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m glad this struck a nerve with you and was liberating!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes! Life imitates art, but for us as artists, art imitates life. Glad you liked this!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m so glad this is encouraging to you, Zachary! The recent past has been a time of growing for me as well; it&#8217;s so encouraging to know that the wider our experiences range and the more issues we face and grow through, the more we&#8217;re equipped to tell stories that are nuanced and powerful. God bless you into the future as you seek to tell those stories!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My pleasure! I&#8217;m happy you found benefit in this article, and it&#8217;s always wonderful to meet another fan of the Wingfeather Saga!</p>
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				<title>Martin Detwiler replied to the topic Controversial Opinion: &quot;Reading makes your writing better&quot; is bad advice in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The words of <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a> serve as a sufficient stand-in for my own on this subject.</p>
<p>I like the conversation and the premise of objecting to overbearing writing advice; but at the same time, most writing dogma comes from a place of near-universal applicability and shouldn&#8217;t be thrown out with the bathwater it has steeped in.</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Really enjoyed this article, Daeus!</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, wow. I agree wholeheartedly with this. Thank you for taking the time to put this down on &#8220;paper&#8221; and share it with us. I&#8217;m glad what I wrote was able to provide a springboard for these thoughts, and I hope they have continued to do so!</p>
<p>Also, thank you for your sincere encouragement. Every one of these articles is a team effort and we&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94275"><a href="https://storyembers.org/4-lessons-christian-writers-can-glean-from-the-horror-genre/comment-page-1/#comment-7947" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow! You&#8217;re so welcome! Glad I could provide some help to sort through your approach to the genre.</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I absolutely put them together in the same sentence. &#x1f605; I still remember my first reading through the Wingfeather Saga, with my jaw on the floor *consistently*, and my heart squeezed with the richness and beauty of the story. </p>
<p>Thanks for sharing that quote! Love it so much.<br />
And thanks for reading! I&#8217;m glad this could get you thinking</p>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for reading and sharing! I hope it helps your cousin!</p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 02 Aug 2021 02:13:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes I wish my imagination was more visually vivid. Other times I am glad it&#8217;s not. Really interesting how we all interact with stuff differently. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m glad this got you thinking!</p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/karthmin/" rel="nofollow ugc">Martin Detwiler</a> wrote a new post Shortly after I graduated from high school, I decided to watch a horror film for the first time. I wasn’t sure I wanted to, because I’d never been a fan of scenes designed to sta [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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