Story Embers | Jeremy | Group Activity https://storyembers.org/members/jeremydvance/activity/groups/ Public group activity feed of which Jeremy is a member. Tue, 28 Apr 2026 22:56:32 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 c6c91d341d857f4045b41b6f3df6b175 Lydiyah joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105327/ Sun, 30 Jun 2024 17:33:55 -0400 0 fe1791027ba9e288274b3f793c21068b Samantha Farrar joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105320/ Thu, 20 Jun 2024 14:24:31 -0400 0 d87147218697726af517f330c051d60a RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers: So...I need someone who is crazy about correcting grammar, as […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104959/ Sat, 12 Aug 2023 12:12:23 -0400 So…I need someone who is crazy about correcting grammar, as in typos, sentences that are not structured right, inconsistencies in spelling and capitalization, wrong punctuation. If your like that, would you mind editing an incomplete original sci-fi book? I know this sounds like an ad, but I need someone to help me out with my grammar. Just let…[Read more]

]]> 3 3317f412aab36f63850373d2c39c5d1b Em with an E joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104949/ Wed, 09 Aug 2023 00:54:43 -0400 0 2e22a0c54b00b3d1fa0f4f8394d8f0eb Jaclyn joined the group Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104922/ Sun, 23 Jul 2023 21:10:48 -0400 0 f29e658f3f79a6d4004b818c7151842e MiaJoy replied to the topic Teen Writers in the forum Writers of Children's/Middle Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104854/ Fri, 07 Jul 2023 18:23:09 -0400 Hi Lydia!

Yes, I’m working on a middle-grade mystery/action novel. I finished the rough draft and am now working on revising. I love getting new ideas, it’s so exciting to me!

I’ve never been great with themes either, but I’ve done research by reading fables and fairy tales, as well as other books, and deciphering their themes. I think you have…[Read more]

]]> 0 6f86bb4c6630919964c0d274ae74295d Abrielle replied to the topic Teen Writers in the forum Writers of Children's/Middle Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104837/ Thu, 06 Jul 2023 15:02:12 -0400 @miajoy88

Hi! I’m Lydia, I’m currently seventeen. Do you have a current project? At the moment, I’m torn between a couple things; a sci-fi and a fantasy, both somewhere in the YA/children’s area. What’s your favorite part about writing? For me, I really love my characters. It’s so much fun playing around with them, watching how they interact, and…[Read more]

]]> 0 806c07d82e23ce088030d9b733605e93 Abrielle started the topic Short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104833/ Thu, 06 Jul 2023 01:10:26 -0400 Hi guys! I recently finished a short story (though it is technically a little long for a ‘short story’). I was wondering, would anybody be willing to give me feedback on it? If your willing to read it but don’t have time for in-depth criticism, my big question is, is it worth turning into a full length novel?

Well, here goes.

 

Crow

The…[Read more]

]]> 0 1e2a0525e3d69a71d56d4248e68a2ddd RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers: So I've got a problem, I like to plan out stories like crazy […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104806/ Thu, 29 Jun 2023 10:39:31 -0400 So I’ve got a problem, I like to plan out stories like crazy and many of them I will never write down but will just be added to my mind’s archives. One of theses stories will be the death of Grathmere, my hidden Antag for Guardian Angels and the following 3 books (What can I say? I wanted a complete story). The problem is, after he is defeated by…[Read more]

]]> 5 289d4713ef79393ea344f05ac6b3fee6 RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers: 13th Birthday Sabotage RAE Nahim Nayhelm was […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104790/ Sun, 25 Jun 2023 11:18:36 -0400 13th Birthday Sabotage
RAE

Nahim Nayhelm was today twenty-one. The Laxorian landscape of tall grasslands was filled with armored Realn as they prepared for the ensuing battle on the old ruin grounds of the city of Laxan. As Nahim’s hands glided through the checks of his weapons, he thought back through all the birthdays he had had o…[Read more]

]]> 1 0600da29e0b08d3ae2803936da12d3cd RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers: Hey. It's RAE. I have been trying to write a book called […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104739/ Mon, 19 Jun 2023 10:39:01 -0400 Hey. It’s RAE. I have been trying to write a book called Guardian Angels, a space story. Can I get some constructive criticism on the first chapter?

1. Laxan
Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava drooled into the city streets. Rock soared into the air to land on crawling Nanian bugs. Ash was mixed in with every shaking breath. They had lost. The…[Read more]

]]> 4 6607c389e3bf505ca9708b431dc9368e RAE joined the group Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104737/ Mon, 19 Jun 2023 10:23:56 -0400 0 00cff0f2a6ad3d5059ecee72efa131db Sharon Marcus joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104713/ Sat, 10 Jun 2023 09:01:21 -0400 0 ed7beacae079e24101fa953a2e22d8bd Abrielle joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104694/ Fri, 02 Jun 2023 16:08:07 -0400 0 080ee497f7602abe66e88ed60e142de3 Abrielle joined the group Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104690/ Thu, 01 Jun 2023 23:04:43 -0400 0 cfde379f5defb94e02ac6e04778c7c4c Bethany joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104666/ Wed, 24 May 2023 06:34:48 -0400 0 26c3b3a452ec4ae489f35728f895aeee Pearl Christine joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104531/ Fri, 07 Apr 2023 23:17:18 -0400 0 80c8afd12391cc87a0065a3929cfa0fc Sarafini joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104416/ Mon, 27 Mar 2023 20:27:58 -0400 0 dbdb3e7b5c3cebb95f49f570ce3fa120 Sarafini joined the group Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104415/ Mon, 27 Mar 2023 20:27:55 -0400 0 df073be0f8ce1193f51272e41a94fa98 Sarafini joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104412/ Mon, 27 Mar 2023 20:27:45 -0400 0 444600d22d63259e0c61591c16938759 Daeus Lamb replied to the topic New Phase of Life... Aka: Goodbye! in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104312/ Mon, 13 Mar 2023 21:16:56 -0400 @olivia I’ll remove you. I do think you have to subscribe from the emails manually, unless perhaps I completely deleted your account.

]]> 0 e6424fbf8ed9f9ce11c9fdc7cd29c88c Daeus Lamb replied to the topic New Phase of Life... Aka: Goodbye! in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104311/ Mon, 13 Mar 2023 21:16:53 -0400 @olivia I’ll remove you. I do think you have to subscribe from the emails manually, unless perhaps I completely deleted your account.

]]> 0 b3a51439e64fd1541586e03a1ad53d75 BookDragon joined the group Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104305/ Mon, 13 Mar 2023 12:41:03 -0400 0 473fa49b97c521dea7426862766fb935 Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic New Phase of Life... Aka: Goodbye! in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104303/ Mon, 13 Mar 2023 12:21:17 -0400 @olivia Good question! I’ll let Daeus answer the forum question since he knows that better than I do. But the emails and forum access are not connected. You’ll need to manually unsubscribe your email at the bottom of the email to stop receiving those. (:

Glad to have been with you for this last part of your journey!

]]> 0 390b0f30f94f85e32711f4b07dfa2028 Olivia Catherine replied to the topic New Phase of Life... Aka: Goodbye! in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104286/ Sat, 11 Mar 2023 23:37:14 -0400 @daeus-lamb @josiah

Oh, and if I officially get kicked off the forum (haha, just kidding), will I also no longer receive the emails? I wanna unsubscribe from those as well.

]]> 0 8a0bb76d34c46de8e934be6acee62deb Olivia Catherine started the topic New Phase of Life... Aka: Goodbye! in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104285/ Sat, 11 Mar 2023 23:26:44 -0400 My main character has a dilemma…

She’s part of this great group of young people who all love to write, but she’s discovered she is in a different phase of life and must move on. How can she exit the group?

 

 

Lol, all that was just for fun. I’m the main character and this is the group of writers. But ya, I’m in a new phase of life and need…[Read more]

]]> 0 de9fdf0eb86e4ebd5f6488b9f2962af5 MiaJoy started the topic Teen Writers in the forum Writers of Children's/Middle Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104229/ Wed, 01 Mar 2023 23:34:37 -0400 Hi everybody! As a teen writer myself, I would love to connect to other young authors who are serious about their writing and want to help. I’m putting this under middle grade/ children’s because that’s what I write, but if anyone knows a way to make this a main discussion point, perhaps under YA, that would be really helpful! Anyways, feel free…[Read more]

]]> 0 f87d2cdb563d5c92099f7c784b79917e MiaJoy joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104228/ Wed, 01 Mar 2023 23:25:56 -0400 0 9209359bfbe7429eb70b68a1bc80e676 Ava Murbarger joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104178/ Sun, 19 Feb 2023 21:55:05 -0400 0 efc002a3544dda29973ddd6e56391c6c Lightbulb joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104093/ Sat, 04 Feb 2023 15:14:23 -0400 0 28c49ccf751411690af4babc72cc8aaf Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103984/ Wed, 25 Jan 2023 02:31:28 -0400 @winter_rose also I sent the story to your primary email.

]]> 0 823616a7a5b346dcfb921066311cc806 Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103983/ Wed, 25 Jan 2023 02:30:54 -0400 @winter_rose I’m so sorry I must’ve accidentally deleted the doc…

Lets see… General Zeinli Danu-Windu, her Padawan Goane, and Clone Captain Bo’.
There’s also her cousin, a Mando and part of a sect in the Order but not a Jedi, although he has a lightsaber. Lt. Will Danu.

Then there was Agent Jaina Danu, his sister, an agent for the republic. S…[Read more]

]]> 0 bd5591c41816def861819667a435c578 Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103982/ Wed, 25 Jan 2023 02:04:40 -0400 @emma-walker

I think the second one would be cool.  It would give us a new setting to work with as well.

Yeah that might be helpful.  I only skimmed a few of the older posts though.

Oh yeah, would you be able send me the descriptions of your characters again? I tried to find the file in older posts but it didn’t seem to be working.

. . . . . .…[Read more]

]]> 0 df9e201bcba275fb1684714cfdd4c5e6 Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103980/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 17:32:12 -0400 I guess I should go back and review what all just happened.

]]> 0 88109e416db8f0e260d965ae1880a9eb Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103977/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 14:17:25 -0400 @winter_rose either way is fine with me lol

]]> 0 88109e416db8f0e260d965ae1880a9eb Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103976/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 14:17:25 -0400 @winter_rose either way is fine with me lol

]]> 0 641123df88f32b9a975ecede61442d2f Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103975/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 02:34:22 -0400 Okay!

It looks like the last things that happened is the group with Solstice, Zeinli, Cresh, Bo’, and Rookie are in the forest planning their next course of action, and the rest of them (including the king and the prince) are on a republic ship that has just been captured by the Separatists.

My original idea was for the characters to repair t…[Read more]

]]> 0 c88f7900c122714e31db046e2448aa1c Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103974/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 02:14:54 -0400 @winter_rose That’s greattttt

Ah lol, okay.

okay cool. Let me edit it some and I will.

]]> 0 d37f791bb13abcf962d5dfe951bdff51 Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103973/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 02:13:05 -0400 @emma-walker

I learned a lot last year, haha.  It was a crazy year but it was good.

No, I see the email.  I have two emails and I don’t regularly check the one I gave to you 🫤.  That was my bad.

Hehe sounds super cool!! Yes, shoot me the story, I’d love to read it.

]]> 0 606c710f45cae5efc171bf53fb5e0f18 Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103972/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 02:06:32 -0400 @winter_rose yeahhh wby?

Hmmm… what was the gmail you used for when I sent the sw fanfic doc…? Because I might’ve emailed the wrong person Lolol

Hehe actually… I might send you the story. It starts as a rp with a friend with rebels charas but then I wrote the rest. And I love this new character………..

 

lol kk

]]> 0 215d29c826aeb84ebe909988f414d164 Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103971/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 01:59:22 -0400 @emma-walker

Sweet!

Oh, I must not have seen.  Sorry! My primary email is raspberrryrose05 at gmail.com if you ever need to reach me again and if you didn’t already have it.

Really? What is your idea?

Okay! I’ll look back and see what exactly is going on in this story….

]]> 0 f9e1652b8a97efb3975caf164ed80b48 Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103970/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 01:50:36 -0400 @winter_rose Heyyy.
It was good! I think I tried emailing you not too long ago too?

I actually had the most amazing idea that goes great with my Depa Jarrus! 😀

we Can keep going with the roleplay if you’d like. If we can figure out what we were doing lol!

]]> 0 269757b3b876234822a08842ef9a05bb Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103969/ Tue, 24 Jan 2023 01:25:32 -0400 @emma-walker

Hello!! Sorry for the late reply.

Indeed, it has been a very long time!  How was 2022 for you?

Would you like to continue the roleplay? Or start a new one?  I’m open to any ideas you may have. 😁

]]> 0 1e764fb758afea3fb75c4251f8d70bf2 93@ImperatorPenguin posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers: I'm new here. I have Aspergers. I like playing video games […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103966/ Sun, 22 Jan 2023 03:26:06 -0400 I’m new here.

I have Aspergers.
I like playing video games and watching cartoons.
And I have anxiety issues.

Currently, I’m working on a rewrite of the Star Wars Original Trilogy… specifically publishing the thing.
It’s not what it sounds like.

]]> 4 fa10c60823194842f37bbc4fbe68be02 93@ImperatorPenguin joined the group Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103965/ Sun, 22 Jan 2023 02:55:52 -0400 0 8d642ed1a36853ae4d3198cdf3176ced Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103916/ Sun, 08 Jan 2023 02:28:13 -0400 @winter_rose Hello!!

Its been such a long time!

]]> 0 d37449c6a56851ffc9c81985efaf2ba9 Esther posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers: Hi all! I’m super excited to be part of a Christian Sci-Fi f […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103305/ Mon, 17 Oct 2022 12:24:32 -0400 Hi all! I’m super excited to be part of a Christian Sci-Fi forum. It’s super neat to meet all of you. 😀

A little bit about me:
Loves coffee,
Loves cats,
Loves daydreaming about writing,
Aspiring to make a difference with words.

At the moment I’m writing a serial story about a Globalised Society connected by Alternate/Virtual Reality.
Is this…[Read more]

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