Story Embers | Archer360 | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/archer360/activity/ Activity feed for Archer360. Sat, 01 Aug 2026 15:28:07 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 940f98f7437dd3140f6085b990033b25 Archer360 replied to the topic Engraved By Hope Prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/7702/ Sun, 03 Jun 2018 20:06:09 -0400 I am having the same problem actually. Really strange…

Okay thank you so much! I will keep this in mind when I go back and edit itΒ  πŸ™‚

Thank you again!

]]> 0 3187ade1ba3993f2920775ff81ea17ce Archer360's profile was updated https://storyembers.org/activity/p/7384/ Fri, 01 Jun 2018 15:24:28 -0400 0 e940caa03ed32854ac9fab4d6c5a5cea Archer360 replied to the topic New Excerpt for Theme Discussion in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/7380/ Fri, 01 Jun 2018 14:48:14 -0400 @missfaeriekaiti Yay! I am so glad that you have more written πŸ˜€ I would absolutely love to beta-read it for you when you need it!

Enjoy your life outside the computer! πŸ˜‰

]]> 0 82929c0ddef950504347a6f62090f202 Archer360 replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 - Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/7371/ Fri, 01 Jun 2018 14:00:04 -0400 I left some feedback on @missfaeriekaiti excerpt πŸ™‚

]]> 0 18178f502a59f9c8039ae433fdaec2ae Archer360 replied to the topic New Excerpt for Theme Discussion in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/7370/ Fri, 01 Jun 2018 13:49:51 -0400 @missfaeriekaiti Nice work! I really enjoyed reading this excerpt and definitely want to read more. πŸ˜€

The descriptions you have of the place where this scene unfolds is great! Just some thoughts to think about – Is is a small or big room (I am going to guess small because of how the action played out?), did the dog/werewolf fight break anything…[Read more]

]]> 0 ae5fe9760bf76e0c83dfa185a39f3497 Archer360 replied to the topic 2018 Week 2 - Finding Details in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/4429/ Fri, 11 May 2018 18:06:24 -0400 @happyholly_c Yes, it is a bedroom. (If you want to be specific it’s my writing corner, aka my bedroom πŸ™‚ )

]]> 0 56d4698055aabc1fd1693a24e68aba2a Archer360 replied to the topic 2018 Week 2 - Finding Details in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/4415/ Fri, 11 May 2018 16:51:59 -0400 1. Dirty clothes on the floor

2. Unkempt bed

3. Over stuffed drawers

4. Stacks of books

5. Papers in disarray on the bed, shelves, and floor

6. Open laptop

7. Breezy curtains

8. Photos on the walls

9. Scribbled in notebooks

10. Sound waves vibrating through the room.

What place am I describing?

]]> 0 e562fb1298ae4c89ee37db2302ff1290 Archer360 replied to the topic Dark Father in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3990/ Tue, 08 May 2018 18:37:23 -0400 @rolena-hatfield Yay! No problem! πŸ˜‰

Yes. Just yes, yes, yes. You have no idea how you just tied a really cool plot element together. I might just do it. 😀 *happydance* #spoilers lol.

I was thinking that if that did happen, it would be sooo cool! Especially if you guided the readers to think that something else happened to the note. Haha, I am…[Read more]

]]> 0 acdb049535da0c5513e2c5a264daa529 Archer360 replied to the topic Dark Father in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3913/ Tue, 08 May 2018 02:17:55 -0400 Oh my. I totally want to know more! I was so sad when I got to the last page.

At first I was curious about note but after reading about the Light Giving scene, I am more curious about the Dark Father and the Light World with the interesting ceremony/event. And then the note’s relationship to that.

Hmm… I would expect that there would be a…[Read more]

]]> 0 abc24c0cae1d5c0827e8bd7fcb344518 Archer360 replied to the topic Rillumen Colors & Related Randomness in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3835/ Mon, 07 May 2018 18:09:11 -0400 Either sounds good to me! I think they all look good together πŸ™‚

]]> 0 c7f10ea66bc3c6e50a1623c73586a3b5 Archer360 replied to the topic A Declaration of War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3791/ Mon, 07 May 2018 13:41:58 -0400 So after thinking about last night, I think have have to change my vote for story #2. Here’s why. It is unique and is definitely intriguing. Like it is not what you would expect of describing the sunset. It is like a shocking factor. It might surprise the readers with its unusual way to describe the sun.

But I am good with whatever you guys…[Read more]

]]> 0 e3042c33164ec7c95f84c04d71b81247 Archer360 replied to the topic A Declaration of War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3713/ Sun, 06 May 2018 22:13:32 -0400 I liked both as well but I also vote #1

]]> 0 8787bc3751768586a9c852b1efee8217 Archer360 replied to the topic Engraved By Hope Prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3387/ Thu, 03 May 2018 16:46:49 -0400 Thanks! 😊

]]> 0 65dba22f28c0d2d292ba73fe8b45f5c3 Archer360 replied to the topic Engraved By Hope Prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3351/ Thu, 03 May 2018 12:24:17 -0400 @missfaeriekaiti

Thank you so much for doing that! I really appreciate it! We need people like you πŸ˜‰

Good to know.

It was totally an accident that he found her. In fact, as the novel progresses, you find out that there is a lot more to this prologue story that what I am actually telling. πŸ™‚ There is a fine line with revealing too much and not…[Read more]

]]> 0 d1480cbe19a14cd5627538c58788596a Archer360 replied to the topic A Declaration of War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3350/ Thu, 03 May 2018 12:07:31 -0400 Everyone has such great ideas!! What are your guys’ thoughts on describing the multifaceted views of the sunset. We have already said a sunset can make us feel happy, complete, fearful, worrisome, expectant etc… Well what if in our description of sunsets, we acknowledge all of these aspects. Like how it can be interpreted in different ways? Like…[Read more]

]]> 0 c7c66e26e01d6f2c73daf0f4a42ff758 Archer360 replied to the topic Music for Writing in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3171/ Wed, 02 May 2018 12:42:27 -0400 The only time I can write with a song with lyrics is if I am listening to Christian worship music like Bethel. Other than that, I usually listen to movie soundtracks (just instrumental) and anime type music. Music helps me write emotion into my scenes. πŸ™‚

]]> 0 c98543fedd8786b6ec3fbcbdb20544b1 Archer360 replied to the topic Engraved By Hope Prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3169/ Wed, 02 May 2018 12:17:37 -0400 Thank you so much guys for giving me feedback!

@missfaeriekaiti

some stylistic issues kept taking me out of the story

Do you mind if I ask exactly what issues drew you out of the story? Since this will be the first thing the readers will read, I want to make sure I keep them in the story. Colton actually finds Brianna on the ground. So they…[Read more]

]]> 0 2ef76aa75888be5ad01e667db7d64ddc Archer360 replied to the topic A Declaration of War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3125/ Wed, 02 May 2018 02:21:35 -0400 When I think of sunsets, I think of pinks, oranges, yellows and reds all blending together. The colors are bright and vibrate. Like a warm summer evening. Or a fiery furnace. It is radiating the wonder and majesty of its creator

That’s all I got right now… πŸ˜›

]]> 0 2b8d603f715f2ea84d8d517cf07f1d95 Archer360 started the topic Engraved By Hope Prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/2895/ Tue, 01 May 2018 12:25:12 -0400 This is the prologue to my WIP that I have been working on for years. I haven’t really shared it with anyone so my question is, does it intrigue you? If it doesn’t, how could I make it have a stronger pull? Can you feel any emotion? Note: You should know that the rest of the novel is set seven years after this event takes place and is from the…[Read more]

]]> 0 6d4feddb24342a68c238506670dcc578 Archer360 replied to the topic 2018 Week 1 - Description in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/2866/ Tue, 01 May 2018 03:00:29 -0400 Deserted.
Emma gripped her clipboard til her knuckles turned white.Β  Forcing herself to move, Emma slowly walked around the shop, shoes clicking on the white marble tiles, as she took in the scene; storing the facts to memory.

The sunlight filtered in from the tall windows, illuminating the small specks of chalk dust floating through the air.…[Read more]

]]> 0 85d5221114fba2c345f9950df5b2a21e Archer360 replied to the topic Hia! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/602/ Tue, 17 Apr 2018 17:55:44 -0400 @rolena-hatfield and @scribbles Yay! I’m not alone! πŸ˜› This particular squirrel is a California squirrel lol. It posed for me to take the picture

Yes! I love competitions! I have been competing for about 5 years now. πŸ™‚ I use an Olympic recurve bow. Ooh, nice! I have shot compound before but I prefer recurve.

@briannastorm Nope, not top secret!…[Read more]

]]> 0 5fa26027b4a3e9566e3f297efe045296 Archer360 started the topic Hia! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/569/ Tue, 17 Apr 2018 17:08:52 -0400 Hey everyone! I am super excited to be here! I have been writing for over 8 years but haven’t finished any projects. Hoping to finish the draft of my WIP this year. πŸ™‚

I started writing because I was growing tired of not being able to find good, clean, teen fiction books. And well, here I am! πŸ˜€

Some interesting facts about me:

I’m an…[Read more]

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