Story Embers | Kara Lynn | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/kara-lynn/activity/ Activity feed for Kara Lynn. Thu, 09 Jul 2026 10:15:26 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 1592a483f7cd9af3927f6c0f28ee8225 Kara Lynn replied to the topic Alpha-Readers for a Cowritten Sci-Fi Novel in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/4225/ Thu, 10 May 2018 11:10:39 -0400 @warrenluther04

Hey!

Your plot is really good and intrigued me pretty quickly, however the prologue was extremely short so it didn’t capture me like it should have.

And the news was also a bit choppy and off. I think there should have been interviews with people, a bit more of a serious tone to capture me and the other readers.

Otherwise, I…[Read more]

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