Story Embers | CarolineTheWriter | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/carolinethewriter/activity/ Activity feed for CarolineTheWriter. Sat, 18 Apr 2026 01:31:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 ed7b2f53a9e721a32461cd41d68e62e5 CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/critique-on-my-first-chapter-of-my-newest-project-crystal-thieves/#post-114995 Tue, 16 Jun 2020 19:50:52 -0400 @Arindown

Hi Gracie!

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! I don’t have many plans for Max at the moment, but I’ll try to keep that in mind anyway- thanks for the feedback!

Yes, I’m not worrying too much about the edits- I just would like to hear from people as I write so that I can get better :).

~Caroline

]]> 0 a30aea77a8aaf6eeb46753f4b44725aa CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/critique-on-my-first-chapter-of-my-newest-project-crystal-thieves/#post-114988 Tue, 16 Jun 2020 17:35:04 -0400 @writergirl101

Thanks again, Ella! 🙂

]]> 0 fde93fa9e009a23ef25436520d69b6ab CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/critique-on-my-first-chapter-of-my-newest-project-crystal-thieves/#post-114973 Tue, 16 Jun 2020 02:03:20 -0400 @writergirl101 (me hoping this tag thing works)

Thanks so much, Ella! I’ll turn on suggestions on the file for you- here is an updated link, but you should be able to just refresh the original one as well https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CLGkxJoN4xpEgEAIID49i2UcKjIgBQRFy6gojpNcfQg/edit?usp=sharing

I’m so glad you liked it!

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]]> 0 3b4738955cd2e6a1cfde387b57c909db CarolineTheWriter started the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/critique-on-my-first-chapter-of-my-newest-project-crystal-thieves/ Mon, 15 Jun 2020 22:31:32 -0400 Hi you guys!

I just joined the forum- so I’m still figuring things out, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on the first chapter of my new novel? It’s Middle Grade (I think) and a fantasy story- I just need to know if I introduce the characters well, the pacing is alright, the first line, and if my writing/description gets weak at…[Read more]

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