Story Embers | Aysia Serene | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/aysia-serene/activity/ Activity feed for Aysia Serene. Tue, 14 Apr 2026 00:40:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 e8cd6a75f4500c56c92ac85731b9b47e Aysia Serene posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/steady/#comment-453 Fri, 22 Jun 2018 15:20:40 -0400 That was so phenomenal I don’t know what to say.
Lip-biting, leaning forward, scanning lines quick kind of reading.
Beautiful.
And I didn’t see the twist of him turning himself in coming — that part really got me.
And the names are really cool.
*hopefully* Any chance there are more stories in their world? or about Fiddler?

In reply to - Gabrielle Pollack wrote a new post “Your hands are shaking,” Yirah said.   Fiddler curled his tremor-ridden hands around his mug of honey brew. Yirah would never describe her mischievous charge as sere […] ]]> e2a37fb261b1cf0ac4a9133e6dd60e21 Aysia Serene replied to the topic Oath: Of Wives And Women: Death Snippet in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/oath-of-wives-and-women-death-snippet/#post-39365 Wed, 20 Jun 2018 14:10:59 -0400 Question: you know the comments feature in google docs? Would you like me to use that? How much feedback do you want? I’ll be glad to pour through it, I just don’t want to overwhelm you with far more feedback than you wanted ;P

Cuz like I know the feeling of not getting the needed feedback, but I also know the feeling of getting more than I care…[Read more]

]]> 0 f5e38ec59b2fedff2986b35c8c71a509 Aysia Serene's profile was updated https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9215/ Tue, 19 Jun 2018 14:26:10 -0400 0 27c7fee0afc95e2b106a7a030e669979 Aysia Serene replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/passport-checking-anyone-introductions/page/4/#post-39226 Tue, 19 Jun 2018 14:21:16 -0400 *quick breaths* 

hi-im-aysia-and-honestly-even-this-small-guild-group-is-intimidating-because-there’s-so-much-creativity-and-enthusiasm-it’s-overwhelming

*shuffles feet* *awkward smile*

Let’s just go through a typical first conversation.

 

“Hi! My name is [insert your name].”

“Hi! I’m Aysia.”

“Asia? Like the country?”

“Um. Sure.” *doesn’t…[Read more]

]]> 0 7f9cb468126c7f9c9078b18e2e269ec1 Aysia Serene posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/letter-to-a-wildflower-friend/#comment-347 Sun, 27 May 2018 18:10:23 -0400 Almost cried at the third stanza.
This is phenomenal.
*bookmarks to look at anytime I feel sad*

In reply to - Cindy Green wrote a new post Listen. There is a soft beat inside you— the sound you so often interpreted as the footsteps of those who have run away, echoing, imprinted on your soul. But listen c […] ]]> 0373bcca8be9ea87e3811e5af7fa424b Aysia Serene replied to the topic Is my story to dark? in the forum Themes https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/is-my-story-to-dark/#post-36348 Sun, 27 May 2018 02:51:17 -0400 I can’t answer your questions, but — when you finish this story, let me know. Just from your description and passion, it sounds phenomenal and well-thought-through and exactly the kind of book I want to read.

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