Trallion

aw, thank you,

@skylarynn

this came from my work in progress. I actually just finished writing it yesterday (yay!!!) but it still needs some ironing out… but I will be asking for beta readers here soon. =) Oh, it would be wonderful if I could get it published though!

The world swirled. Nithel’s stomach flipped and he appeared in another room. Giant. With bright walls, almost appearing to be made of ivory or alabaster. The floor was smooth, with golden designs twirling through it, as if they had been melted into the floor. He blinked rapidly at the sudden light, and the despairing fog did not leave his mind. Was…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Hey Jared, it’s up to you, but if I was writing it, I would make the little boy’s speech more clear. Especially stuff like ‘wahnts yau.’ That’s just too unreadable. I’ve found that a better way of showing speech impediments is by using improper grammar, badly worded sentences, and made up contractions.

OKAY EVERYBODY! @ragnarok @hannahrenner @this-is-not-an-alien *claps hands*
Not to toot the same old horn, but we need to lay some ground rules for the character castle to keep the craziness down, and to help everyone understand what’s happening.

These are the original rules, slightly modified~

Welcome to the Character Castle! This is where you…

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@everyone I’m doing an online cleanse (of sorts),  so I don’t know if I’ll be able to keep up. Feel free to use Isella, and I’ll try to write some, but I have an inkling that I’ll be short on time from now on, so if it gets too problematic you can kick her out, or I’ll remove her. Keep being awesome!

@jared-williams

That was fantastic, where is your book and when can I buy it?

@jared-williams

Please let me know if it is hard to understand him and whether or not his intonation make sense or if anything contradicts my description of him…

I found it easy to read Hadwin’s dialogue; honestly it was fun because I don’t usually get to read phonetic speech.  I don’t think you contradicted yourself, and the scene was pretty en…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I had a really interesting idea for a next challenge. It’s similar to this one, except instead of facing their fears, they learn what would have happened if they never face their fears and complete their arc. If they make all the wrong choices and become the worst version of themselves, where would they be in t…

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@jared-williams

hahahaha. I have a poster in my classroom with Gandolph facing the balrog, on top it says “You Shall Not Pass”. and then on the bottom, it says “If You Do Not Have Your Name On Your Paper!”

XD I think I’ve seen posters like that before.

your riddle is a good one,

Thank you! Your last guess about personality is pretty close to the…[Read more]

Ok, I have literally no clue what’s going on…

I’m not killing anyone.

Almost as if reading his thoughts, the world shifted again, into feral darkness.

In a second it’d be over, he’d be somewhere else.

He sucked in a breath, trying not to panic when it didn’t change. Still dark, enclosed. No, this wasn’t happening, it wasn’t! Then he made co…[Read more]

@everyone

I had a really interesting idea for a next challenge. It’s similar to this one, except instead of facing their fears, they learn what would have happened if they never face their fears and complete their arc. If they make all the wrong choices and become the worst version of themselves, where would they be in ten/twenty/thirty/however…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

DENALI YOU’RE BACKKKK!!!!!! I MISSED YOU AND I MISSED NIAROK!!!!!

@inkhorn

pulled Liorah and Aydin out and put Mejt (May-eet) and her older brother, Halmar (did I get his name right?) They’re both around twenty.

Yep, accurate! Halmar is twenty, Mejt is eighteen!

and has a terrible habit of making wry comments about the w…

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Arsene walked downstairs with Lady Crorie, coming face to face with Sherlock and Rook.
“Hello, dearest brother of mine. Oh, I see you brought Rook with you.”
“Good evening.” Rook greeted.
Smirking, Arsene waited to see which of the three would speak first. It was Sherlock.
“Enjoying yourself?”
“Why yes,” Arsene acknowledged, “Thank you for…[Read more]

Crorie sped upstairs, checking the source of the projections. Until now, she didn’t think Arsene had resurfaced into her life. However, the person who installed these projectors was a cocky little showoff. And Arsene, was a showoff. This looked like something he’d do, if he could get away with it. If Arsene did this, he had to have access to thi…[Read more]

“War?” Pia drew closer, prepared to defend her betrothed’s people if need be.

“No, you aren’t.”

“What are you talking about?” Finn asked.

“she’s Thabian,” Ellie said with a nod.

“Oh”

“You’re not to blame for any of this,” Ellie told her, “I would just like to know what’s going on.”

“This mentions a war, but I can’t tell who or why,” Finn said still glued to the gold pieces.

“Could it be the war between our people and…[Read more]

Pia stiffened. “I am not my father, Ellie. Remember that.” She murmured fiercely.

finn sat down next to ellie who was poking the fire with a stick trying to get it going again. “so what exactly are we doing?” he asked.

“preparing some fish for breakfast,”
He laughed, “no, i mean on this adventure or whatever”

“oh. I’m not too sure, actually. we have been heading in that direction” she pointed south, “I gues we’ll see what…[Read more]

Oh yeah, and your riddle is a good one,

@inkhorn

Is it perspective?

some of my other guesses:

Depth

3-Dimensions

Point of View

Personality