@toklaham-veruziaactive 1 day, 17 hours ago
So I looked up the meaning for Effervescence, and the first definition to come up was “bubbles in a liquid; fizz.” second was “vivacity and enthusiasm.” I LOVE the sound of the word, but I don’t know if the ship should be known as bubbles.
Oh my goodness! You made me laugh SOOO hard.
Yeah, Resilience is good. BUT just had a tho…[Read more]
Yeah, I kinda have a lot. But I can’t get rid of any!! 🙁
@beth20, I really liked it, and I agree with Gracie, but I also think that it is kind of hard to keep track of all the charachters.
Yeah, well he doesn’t like Marrill in a weird way. And he didn’t like her at first, but yeah, he likes her lol!
Yeah, I don’t really think that’s a swear word, but yeah, I get what you’re saying!
I only caught a few typos, but overall really good!
You have so many things tying togethor! I like how Marril ‘created’ Jaylin.
Sooo…Jaylin likes some girls?
And then something else… You used the old form of ‘donkey’. It’s not a bad word, just crude to humans these days. (And Jaylin very well could talk like that all the ti…[Read more]
Thank you! And I’m glad you caught those things — I would never have noticed, ’cause ya know, it’s me 😛
And yes! Davion just seemed to work for me!
And I understand the busy! Don’t worry ’bout it. 😉
So, I’m really busy these days you guys. I’m not going to be able to post on here a lot. I’ll come back, but for now I’m on hold. Keep it up, though!! 🙂
Nice brainstorming y’all! (I’ve been reading it all even though I haven’t actually been posting, lol). And I really stink at worldbuilding, so Aleck’s planet is going to be pretty bland and stuff. :/ Good thing he’ll mostly be on The Resilience!!
Nuts. But I get it! Thx for starting this; it’s been great fun.
Ooh, well done Wingiby!! That was really good. 🙂
I did notice that you called the Bird of the Waning Dawn a “she” and an “it”. You might choose one or the other. 🙂
Also, I noticed that you said that the Indians had spears and bows with poisoned arrows. You said that the Indians readied their spears, then a few sentences later Davion had…[Read more]
Yes, it is pretty huge, I’ll have to get some sort of scale up sometime so we can really perceive the size. For now, planet-like in size works.
Aliens would be cool, but I feel like we all already have human characters and cultures so it might get complicated trying to integrate that in. If we can come up with some g…[Read more]
Man, that looks great! And the bubble was an awesome idea — we get the round aspect we were looking for, yet it doesn’t look like the Death Star and more like this amazing techy space-ship built by a gatrillionaire! It’s huge, right? I mean, big enough to sorta be like a planet itself; it’s gotta hold people from every planet’s…[Read more]
All right, here’s a sketch of The Resilience. I was thinking that we could have the amphitheater/arena like a bubble inside of the ship, so that’s what this shows. Let me know if there’s anything I should change or add!
FENWICK’S TALE CONTINUED
(If you have any advice, please tell me! 😀 I hope it isn’t too long)
“Davion crested the knoll a few minutes before sunrise. He stood there, his robe billowing behind him and his hair whipping in the breeze — he had long brown hair, past his shoulders. It was then that he heard it. A soft, trilling sound. And i…[Read more]
Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it 😉 And I’m afraid answers will have to wait — if I ever finish this book 😛
Kinnan: LOVE the descriptions, you make everything so vivid and real. Please post more soon! I know I’m rather late, but I finally made it back to this topic, lol.
And that sounds like a good idea! I’m all for it 😉
If the name THE CULLING doesn’t send people away I don’t know if Despondence IV will be much different…
The Resilience is good with me. It kind of symbolizes what you need to win the games, and also how much of it you need.
YAY!!! I did it! Thanks, @melodyjoy I am so proud now **cheeky little smiley face**
I recently figured the blue line out. You copy and paste what the person said from their post and then put the cursor at the beginning and press the two quotation marks at the top next to bold and italics
Thank you! Did I do it?!?
So I looked up the meaning for Effervescence, and the first definition to come up was…[Read more]
Oh man! Sorry to see you go! But thanks so much for starting this this; I am really enjoying it! 😀
Oh… SO sad to see you go. **crying emoji**
I know what you mean by busy. I prob only have a few weeks left because I have a music camp then a free week then school starts… We’ll see.
Thanks for starting this tho. I am having a blast!
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