Story Embers | Dragonwing753 | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/snaps571/activity/ Activity feed for Dragonwing753. Tue, 14 Apr 2026 00:40:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 ec9d388cdb2e76014d497930f5587789 Dragonwing753's profile was updated https://storyembers.org/activity/p/28000/ Fri, 09 Nov 2018 20:28:40 -0400 0 6213a5aa12ba397908d18e263ba38da3 Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/opinion-on-a-peter-pan-retake/#post-46794 Fri, 07 Sep 2018 18:51:46 -0400 Fellow Ereki,

After much blood, sweat, and tears, I have finally gotten a new portion of my story down. I have pretty much re-written it, so I hope that you enjoy it. Agian, this is only a portion of the novella I plan to write, and if you find anything that you think needs correction, I would welcome your ideas. Thanks for all your help and…[Read more]

]]> 0 7dcfa497f59173d9584bf52eb4648c97 Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/opinion-on-a-peter-pan-retake/#post-45125 Mon, 27 Aug 2018 21:01:04 -0400 Thanks for all of the help!! I’ll update you guys soon.

]]> 0 0660de58108bd9f6e0471d71320197fd Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/opinion-on-a-peter-pan-retake/#post-44783 Sun, 26 Aug 2018 12:46:28 -0400 Thanks so much Sarah! I was having a hard time pinpointing pretty much all of those things, as is obvious in the story, and you gave just the thing to work on!

Snaps

P.S. I like the name Inkdragon. It gives a certain flare

]]> 0 465b875d3c5551261451f24941cf66cb Dragonwing753 started the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/opinion-on-a-peter-pan-retake/ Fri, 24 Aug 2018 23:41:08 -0400 Hey guys!

I was wondering if I could get an opinion on my retake of Peter Pan and Neverland. So far it’s about a group of old people stricken by Alzheimer’s who return to Neverland. I’ve only covered the first two characters, and I need suggestions on whether or not I should continue with the “saving Neverland” theme.

Here’s the part I’ve got…[Read more]

]]> 0 cd472f5b0039dc6a3d0119282ce5a005 Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Introduction Thread 2.0 in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/introduction-thread-2-0/#post-44334 Fri, 24 Aug 2018 03:29:54 -0400 1. What’s the genre and a (brief) summary of your current WIP?

The genre of my WIP is fantasy. I’m trying to remake Peter Pan, and instead of children, it’s all the old people coming back to Neverland and trying to save it. The weird thing is, most of the older versions have had cases of Alzheimer’s, but have mysteriously recovered with no l…[Read more]

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