Story Embers | Rose Sheffler | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/rjsheffler/activity/ Activity feed for Rose Sheffler. Sat, 18 Apr 2026 01:31:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 c8a69ac57d253b2ec660631ca55c261a Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=146333 Mon, 11 Aug 2025 20:00:20 -0400 Christian Stories Don’t Need to Be Deep and Philosophical Many of us sit down at our desks with a list of criteria we believe we must meet before we can be confident that we’re honoring God with our writing. O […]

]]> d881ecac08c71ab7b70e29a5e869b230 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-14669 Fri, 01 Nov 2024 20:23:17 -0400 Thank you

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> fd9807c915057280360dc8e1ea6c9c88 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=119638 Mon, 22 May 2023 08:00:50 -0400 Many writers, myself included, tend to devalue short stories because of their brevity. “Real” writers are supposed to craft novels. Some of the most famous authors of the twentieth century, however, were mas […]

]]> 09ffb38525f1815de525b7cbbfc612d8 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/the-biggest-lie-we-believe-about-strong-female-protagonists/comment-page-2/#comment-11904 Tue, 04 Oct 2022 18:05:03 -0400 Rachel! I’m pleased you’ve come back for a refresher! Good luck with your writing.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The Biggest Lie We Believe about Strong Female Protagonists Strong women, as they’re portrayed in a lot of fiction and films, have a problem. They act like men (albeit hot men with c […] ]]> 829ddf1986a0d4c223db0432c84da92e Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/the-biggest-lie-we-believe-about-strong-female-protagonists/comment-page-2/#comment-11903 Tue, 04 Oct 2022 18:04:31 -0400 Em.K.Hofer, I really enjoy Brandon Sanderson. Shallen is one of those characters that’s complex and thought provoking. I think overall she’s fantastic and a good example of someone dark and broken, but in a way that elicits compassion. I’ve not read the Stormlight Archives recently so my memory of her isn’t the best. But what I do remember, I…[Read more]

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The Biggest Lie We Believe about Strong Female Protagonists Strong women, as they’re portrayed in a lot of fiction and films, have a problem. They act like men (albeit hot men with c […] ]]> 7b5184686aa2ab835e58757eef0a7d4e Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/the-biggest-lie-we-believe-about-strong-female-protagonists/comment-page-2/#comment-11902 Tue, 04 Oct 2022 18:01:50 -0400 Thanks for reading, Dawn. I do not know of Kate Daniels. But thank you for bringing her to my attention. I’ll look her up. Did you have thoughts about her you’d care to share?

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The Biggest Lie We Believe about Strong Female Protagonists Strong women, as they’re portrayed in a lot of fiction and films, have a problem. They act like men (albeit hot men with c […] ]]> 68fc39a846134bcc317364976b0aa2c3 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-11843 Tue, 23 Aug 2022 00:07:49 -0400 Anyone who reads my story makes me feel honored. Anyone who reads and then rereads, makes me feel humbled. You **can** write like this. Try. Fail. Try again. (Probably fail again.) You’ll get there.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> b466b165a15b46b09cada6a9cc638af0 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=99474 Mon, 11 Jul 2022 14:00:22 -0400 When was the last time you were bored?
 
During my childhood, those who dared utter the forbidden phrase “I’m bored” were saddled with a chore or two (or three). Boredom is often viewed as idleness, and the […]

]]> f5e28d3f61d325ea78055534481ea193 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=149064 Thu, 17 Mar 2022 14:00:51 -0400 Worldbuilding is, at its core, an imaginative divergence from reality that begins with a question. It’s most integral to fantasy, science fiction, and Dungeon Masters, but regardless of the genre (or r […]

]]> d8c5c76622667355a2d18d4b7b34e020 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=109386 Mon, 14 Feb 2022 14:00:20 -0400 All writers and readers have an opinion on literary tropes—which ones they like, dislike, and think are overdone, as well as those that reserve the author (or consumer) a spot in the third circle of h […]

]]> 1e1578ee343ce412eeba90245a78a8e8 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-ways-fanfiction-helped-me-grow-as-a-writer/comment-page-1/#comment-11354 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 00:02:56 -0400 Jenna, I’m so glad this piece brought some joy and encouragement to your day! Keep writing and Godspeed!

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post For writers, especially “serious” writers, fanfiction can feel like the elephant in the room. Everyone is aware of it, and many of us have tiptoed into it. Yet, because of the sti […] ]]> 42643c58a7ba171c56dd400647a6d1a3 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-11353 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 00:01:20 -0400 Thank you, Clara.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> 55baf7ceca296cef3d37209153cd72e0 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-11352 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 00:00:54 -0400 Thanks, Martin.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> 6d6ca18026a43523c12c4626d7579b71 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=147743 Mon, 07 Feb 2022 14:00:31 -0400 For writers, especially “serious” writers, fanfiction can feel like the elephant in the room. Everyone is aware of it, and many of us have tiptoed into it. Yet, because of the stigma that clings to it, we avo […]

]]> d84ca48c0b2bd9bc9d12624db370dd1a Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/the-biggest-lie-we-believe-about-strong-female-protagonists/comment-page-2/#comment-11068 Wed, 19 Jan 2022 17:43:58 -0400 Thanks for reading, Melissa. You’re brother sister team sounds refreshing! What a great way to have different perspectives. Shad is the BEST. Reality speaks to people. Keep at it and Godspeed.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The Biggest Lie We Believe about Strong Female Protagonists Strong women, as they’re portrayed in a lot of fiction and films, have a problem. They act like men (albeit hot men with c […] ]]> e43807f49c0daf4c47cf3558d8f78336 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=109477 Thu, 13 Jan 2022 14:00:17 -0400 The Biggest Lie We Believe about Strong Female Protagonists Strong women, as they’re portrayed in a lot of fiction and films, have a problem. They act like men (albeit hot men with curvy bodies and perfect h […]

]]> b799ff749ebd00e0014b3e170f85e01b Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/how-to-detect-and-fix-a-flat-main-character/comment-page-1/#comment-10449 Wed, 15 Dec 2021 19:54:50 -0400 Joelle, I would suggest you ask yourself really difficult questions about this MC. Like, If she’s uninteresting, why are you telling her story? What about her makes YOU interested? It might be you’re struggling to communicate that interest to others. Or it might be that she has no compelling personality. Why should we connect to her? This is NOT…[Read more]

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post A month ago, I had a shocking revelation about my current work-in-progress: my main character lacked a distinguishable personality and clear motives. I’d spent over a year on the s […] ]]> 6e99f851ddca4b1175681f073777adb3 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=145007 Mon, 06 Dec 2021 14:00:49 -0400 A month ago, I had a shocking revelation about my current work-in-progress: my main character lacked a distinguishable personality and clear motives. I’d spent over a year on the story and written almost 100,000 w […]

]]> da7a85107af8d31716d41714501fb6ed Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-why-traditional-heroes-still-matter/comment-page-1/#comment-7820 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:38:23 -0400 Chris! Yes, I would agree that Aragorn is a great example of this. Thanks for reading

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post For thousands of years, audiences have been enamored with stories of heroes going on quests to save the world. From Robin Hood to Luke Skywalker to Wonder Woman, the trope’s v […] ]]> d3ac8cf01f59a2c41630ed078da0afc0 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-why-traditional-heroes-still-matter/comment-page-1/#comment-7819 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:37:44 -0400 We all love a good hero. I’m glad you enjoyed this.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post For thousands of years, audiences have been enamored with stories of heroes going on quests to save the world. From Robin Hood to Luke Skywalker to Wonder Woman, the trope’s v […] ]]> fc20cb6a008d83cd7e92029c190af06c Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7818 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:36:57 -0400 Bethania, I 100% agree. I do the same in my writing.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> a6e38c15066f74ccc951e359c15dbeac Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7817 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:23:51 -0400 Well said Jenny. I think God is a very surprising Being on the whole.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> 9000528a1e2a7faa12d87fd84d8b27e9 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7816 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:23:14 -0400 You’re so welcome, Joelle! Thanks for your enthusiasm and I hope you found the series uplifting

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> 747767d96ea69bc7dd14e53f8c1268d9 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7815 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:22:36 -0400 Hi Taylor, It’s hard to know what Jesus would say, and it’s admirable that you’re wrestling to do it right. Keep trying!

As for the point on Aslan, Lewis seems to use him as a type of Christ but he’s not literally Christ, and I would argue, not even a complete representation (as all representations of Christ must be incomplete). Also, while we…[Read more]

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> 0e5459bc8d2b3839ea58bffe23e7ffa8 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7814 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:19:14 -0400 It’s my pleasure, Gracie

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> 273ce78917b8a2c4099f1636d9e7e738 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7813 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:18:51 -0400 Thanks Brian! Godspeed

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> da1454c57ec567156a27f70e4f7d2478 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/4-factors-to-consider-before-including-physical-manifestations-of-god-in-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-7812 Sat, 17 Jul 2021 21:18:31 -0400 Thanks Zachary! I hope it helps you on your writing journey

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other […] ]]> 61304c70c79cf671b6a8bec65b84d774 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=135659 Mon, 05 Jul 2021 14:00:49 -0400 For thousands of years, audiences have been enamored with stories of heroes going on quests to save the world. From Robin Hood to Luke Skywalker to Wonder Woman, the trope’s variations are endless. But recently a […]

]]> e53a5b68d2498e89535dd989f945849c Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=134553 Mon, 31 May 2021 14:00:07 -0400 The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other mediums. Whether God shows up […]

]]> 32762c9d99ff6aa6dc77b82ddbd3cb3b Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-that-character-names-matter/comment-page-1/#comment-6989 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 12:32:03 -0400 Riah, I’m so glad to find a kindred spirit! This name thing has ALWAYS bothered me and I’m just lucky enough to have a great platform to express my own convictions. Godspeed in your writing.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post I’ve noticed a growing and concerning trend among writers when they’re developing a cast of characters. In an effort to make a protagonist memorable, they slap on a unique, edgy, and […] ]]> b2e1ac1fa302e669e98c22ef82176ff1 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-that-character-names-matter/comment-page-1/#comment-6988 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 12:30:38 -0400 I’m glad you found it. I’ve always admired (and been a little envious of) Tolkien’s ability to synthesize names.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post I’ve noticed a growing and concerning trend among writers when they’re developing a cast of characters. In an effort to make a protagonist memorable, they slap on a unique, edgy, and […] ]]> 5465c3573a2cb4a438f8e0f4ec840a04 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-that-character-names-matter/comment-page-1/#comment-6987 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 12:29:21 -0400 I hope it opens up a new perspective for you and makes your stories even stronger. Godspeed!

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post I’ve noticed a growing and concerning trend among writers when they’re developing a cast of characters. In an effort to make a protagonist memorable, they slap on a unique, edgy, and […] ]]> 5e216423fb6322bb79d2ec76912f6bb7 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-reasons-that-character-names-matter/comment-page-1/#comment-6986 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 12:28:40 -0400 You’re very welcome!

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post I’ve noticed a growing and concerning trend among writers when they’re developing a cast of characters. In an effort to make a protagonist memorable, they slap on a unique, edgy, and […] ]]> f310c897c63fbb6004e9183cad4021b9 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=125984 Mon, 15 Mar 2021 14:00:31 -0400 Every human perspective has value, but some are second nature to writers while others are more unfamiliar and intimidating to explore. That isn’t an excuse to exclude characters who are in different life stages t […]

]]> 083d4dd14c6b02fd014aa04aef5e83cf Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-6512 Wed, 10 Mar 2021 14:17:29 -0400 Thanks, Kathy!

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> d385dde773049083e2c15f2bf560c07a Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-6511 Wed, 10 Mar 2021 14:17:11 -0400 Ella, it was a huge team effort at Story Embers, but thank you for your encouragement. It was my pleasure to share.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> a0887825abd69ddaf96cb360ed562aab Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-6510 Wed, 10 Mar 2021 14:16:12 -0400 Thank you so much.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> c1052271c6bcf15692280667e1b004cb Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-6509 Wed, 10 Mar 2021 14:15:25 -0400 Terah, thank you for reading and leaving feedback. I’m glad my story touched you.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> a4a4e0a49c6cb5a68c8126b3290a663b Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/loving-john-wilson/comment-page-1/#comment-6508 Wed, 10 Mar 2021 14:14:32 -0400 Thanks for reading, Joelle.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post In memory of Chris   “John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her c […] ]]> f115fc32db6627fa9e199f6d5c8a5c53 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=125613 Thu, 04 Mar 2021 14:00:17 -0400 I’ve noticed a growing and concerning trend among writers when they’re developing a cast of characters. In an effort to make a protagonist memorable, they slap on a unique, edgy, and complex moniker and call it […]

]]> 7b8955c464bd5a5c8b8d09545a6c9158 Rose Sheffler wrote a new post https://storyembers.org/?p=124988 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 14:00:29 -0400 In memory of Chris
 
“John’s dead, Maggie.” Ann stood in the doorway, her voice hollow and her cheeks streaked. In the two years that she’d been my roommate, I’d never seen her cry.
 
I dropped the handful of […]

]]> 55778d7d22a22c822ab7db099ec07408 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/3-ways-to-instantly-rope-readers-into-your-first-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-6357 Mon, 22 Feb 2021 01:56:58 -0400 Thank you, Joelle! You’re very kind.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post When faced with an empty page, finding the ideal place to begin your story may seem impossible. The task can become such a burden that you might avoid starting altogether.   In […] ]]> 87319afca59b51a285605dc111e2b030 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/how-to-develop-writing-habits-that-can-survive-a-fluctuating-schedule/comment-page-1/#comment-6231 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:52:22 -0400 Abi, hold on to that peace! And Godspeed in this coming year. I hope everything you found in this article helps you reach your writing goals.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Like most of us, you probably dream of circumstances that allow you to write for several hours a day without making any sacrifices or experiencing any interruptions. But the reality […] ]]> 06e29fdf2da422b9b2409a6790e94ce2 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/how-to-develop-writing-habits-that-can-survive-a-fluctuating-schedule/comment-page-1/#comment-6230 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:50:21 -0400 Kristianne, your body and your mind are connected in so many ways. The five senses really do so much to prep your mind without you really noticing. Try it out and see what works. I’m so glad I could help, even a little bit.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Like most of us, you probably dream of circumstances that allow you to write for several hours a day without making any sacrifices or experiencing any interruptions. But the reality […] ]]> 582d64749f9fafa93a97c9dba5c38bbb Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/how-to-develop-writing-habits-that-can-survive-a-fluctuating-schedule/comment-page-1/#comment-6229 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:48:37 -0400 It was my pleasure. I hope you can work out a schedule that works well for you.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Like most of us, you probably dream of circumstances that allow you to write for several hours a day without making any sacrifices or experiencing any interruptions. But the reality […] ]]> 6061e8fb717f66d929d735bee0b6cdf8 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/how-to-develop-writing-habits-that-can-survive-a-fluctuating-schedule/comment-page-1/#comment-6228 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:48:13 -0400 I am so glad I could help. Writing schedules are the worst but being flexible is a great skill to nurture. Good luck!

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Like most of us, you probably dream of circumstances that allow you to write for several hours a day without making any sacrifices or experiencing any interruptions. But the reality […] ]]> f03da493e78626be4a2bf09d043ebf52 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/what-to-do-when-your-chapter-falls-flat-and-you-dont-know-why/comment-page-1/#comment-6227 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:47:07 -0400 Rachel, you are so welcome! Good luck editing!

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Have you ever been writing a scene or chapter and something felt wrong? In the moment, you couldn’t name a specific detail that needed to be added, removed, or changed. That’s bec […] ]]> 225b057e718a982901206d55e5fc5eed Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/what-to-do-when-your-chapter-falls-flat-and-you-dont-know-why/comment-page-1/#comment-6226 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:46:39 -0400 You can call me “Rose.” And you’re welcome.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Have you ever been writing a scene or chapter and something felt wrong? In the moment, you couldn’t name a specific detail that needed to be added, removed, or changed. That’s bec […] ]]> cf072419efb969ba790473be52616c23 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/what-to-do-when-your-chapter-falls-flat-and-you-dont-know-why/comment-page-1/#comment-6225 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:45:34 -0400 Nate. First, thanks for reading. Second, I’ll try to answer your question as best I can. What’s your primary goal of the scenes that aren’t working? If the primary goal is worldbuilding then I might try cutting that out until later. (worldbuilding can be added after a first draft.) Ask yourself what your MC wants the most right after waking up…[Read more]

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post Have you ever been writing a scene or chapter and something felt wrong? In the moment, you couldn’t name a specific detail that needed to be added, removed, or changed. That’s bec […] ]]> 98468186233a71b9091fc01447897be0 Rose Sheffler posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/stop-pretending-children-dont-exist-in-your-story-world/comment-page-1/#comment-6224 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 16:36:52 -0400 Thanks Kylie, and good luck with your writing. I’m always happy when people take something away from one of my articles.

In reply to - Rose Sheffler wrote a new post I’ve noticed a vacuum developing in fiction. Popular novels, particularly fantasy and young adult, tend to exclude child characters. And if children do play a role, they’re car […] ]]>