@joelle-stone

I hope it isn’t dead…. 

Aha! Thou hast been brave and started RP-ing again! (and no problem, lol, the southern accent is hilarious)

In answer to your way earlier questions:

“1. Does he have any opinions about Elves/Hhborgens/Puppies/anything-else that we should know about?
2. Is he normally hospitiable/ready to jump in, or…[Read more]

GOSH.

AFTER ALL THE PAINFUL WORLD-BUILDING/PLANNING/FIGURING-EVERYTHING-OUT (which I’m not very good at, considering I have panster leanings XD), THIS STORY IS NOT DYING, OKAY?

YOU GUYS ARE NOT DISAPPEARING.

WE ARE GOING TO WRITE THIS STORY, AND IT IS GOING TO BE AWESOME. 

Understood?

Good.

@joelle-stone @winter_rose @melodyjoy

@joelle-stone

*sheepish grin* Why, hello there. Your RP-ing call summoned me.

I second Rose’s questions. 🙂

@winter_rose

Uh, Idk…. I didn’t know that was the plan–but I can do so with no problem!

@joelle-stone

GTG now, critique later

@rebekah

Note: Suggestions are in bold

This sentence feels a little wordy, so maybe you could reword it to something like: “…. but she did not wrap her extremely tattered, dark-colored cloak tighter around herself.” Or something like that, anyway 😀

This is sentence above is kinda long and confusing, so maybe something more like: “Her…[Read more]

@skylarynn

I notice you use the same phrase “creasing her brow.” It felt slightly repetitive.

I love your cliff hanger ending, and how you smoothly portray Nadia as a… *thinks of word* kinda someone who looks out for Ada? Am I interrupting that correctly?

Sorry this critique is short–I’m just not finding any “problems” in y’alls wonderful s…[Read more]

@emma-walker

Critique time!! The beginning of your story feels a little a little abrupt, but that might be just because you wanted it to start fast paced?

You do a really great job of portraying Esthelle’s confusion!!

And that ending to your first post of the story? The Do not tell them who you are part? Such a cool cliff hanger!! Cannot wai…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

OF COURSE WE’VE MISSED YOU!!

@Everyone:

Okay, good to know! (About your critiquing preferences)

@melancholicwriter

Okay, critique. Um, you never mentioned where the main character and the other guy are, or what the main character’s name is, or anything for readers to go on. Do you get into that later, since this is a…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Perfectly understandable!! 😉

@rebekah12 @emma-walker @skylarynn @anyone-else-who-posted-a-story-and-I-accidentatlly-missed it:

To kinda echo what Joelle said earlier: How detailed of a critique do y’all want? Like.. concept? Or more of a grammatical/line-by-line type thingy?

@rusted-knight

OOooohhhhh, so that means Ferran is with a SHAPE-SHIFTER?? *is giddy* That’s a really cool idea. Are you good with it, @rose-colored-fancy? Rusted Knight, if Klein is with Zanar and Riure, are you good with the challenge that Joelle suggested they have to complete? Or would you rather the three do something else to escape the…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

*nods slowly*

Also, still up for the meeting today? At 4:00 pm your time? I think can make it, but if not I will tell you 😉

@joelle-stone

Haha, great minds think alike, don’t they? 😉 Okay, I’ll try to post soon then! *realizes I said that last time* *makes mental note to write a reminder*

And gotcha!

@joelle-stone

Right, Ian is a human. And yurp, I believe that was the plan!!

*grins* I like questions, so hit me with as many as you want! 😛

@joelle-stone

Happy (late, very late) Easter!!!

@rebekah12 @birds-rock @ivi-hope and Joelle:

Do we still need this, since we’re moving to a different doc instead? (That is the plan, right???)

@rebekah12 @emma-walker

Nice to have you join us!! (Rebekah, chapter 57??!! *grins at you* W.O.W) I’ll try to critique in a bit (perhaps today or on Tuesday). And @skylarynn, yay, nice! I love how nicely you incorporated the critiques from earlier. *nods* I really like it and the new bit you posted! (As I said, I’ll try to critique later 🙂 )

*clears throat* *assumes Oskar N. Reteep-ish voice* In the words of our beloved Kylie S. Pierce: “Um…”

@joelle-stone @kylie-wingfeather

I call her Mama Meat because *pauses to glare at said mother, with whom I still have a squabble with* *continues* I call her Mama Meat because… because… I CAN AHA! *starts laughing* *realizes no on is…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy @jasmine

Love your guys’ riddles!! So cool 🙂