Story Embers | Linz | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/linz/activity/ Activity feed for Linz. Sat, 27 Jun 2026 13:26:05 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 a2f80ad6545711f8af637fef83db5853 Linz posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/three-ways-hunger-games-engages-readers-with-foreshadowing/#comment-1204 Tue, 02 Oct 2018 19:14:56 -0400 Thanks, Maddie!
Yeah. A lot of writers don’t seem to like the series. It’s weird because I thought it was pretty well written all in all. Depressing, sure. But not bad story wise.

Awesome. I’ll have to check out those series then. (I’m always on the lookout for books with great foreshadowing.) ๐Ÿ˜€

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In reply to - Story Embers wrote a new post By Lindsi McIntyre ย  A scene pauses for a moment on a scrap of paper tucked beneath a chair. ย  A hero feels uneasy as the last-ditch plan against the villain is set into m […] ]]> 5ccd0a053f473353ddc1858597e512b6 Linz replied to the topic Allegory vs symbolism in the forum Themes https://storyembers.org/activity/p/14107/ Tue, 21 Aug 2018 16:51:39 -0400 That does help! Thanks for sharing. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 0660e9b4ec4149a8bbcae3893911ae8a Linz replied to the topic Allegory vs symbolism in the forum Themes https://storyembers.org/activity/p/13735/ Wed, 15 Aug 2018 04:20:04 -0400 Okay, really ignorant question here but- Is there really a difference between allegory and symbolism?

]]> 0 f9b0e92867c50ea64463e415f350d347 Linz replied to the topic Needing Advice - My Characters Reactions in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/activity/p/5269/ Fri, 18 May 2018 17:02:36 -0400 Maybe you could show him being really energetic at the beginning of the story, then really lethargic after he loses his children, then when his son comes back it’s like he gets a second chance at life too. You wouldn’t even need to show the second part in realย time, you could just have them barely scrape by because the dad is too depressed to…[Read more]

]]> 0 c2a5cab1ae6dc8f98518cc06fd91d921 Linz replied to the topic Needing Advice - My Characters Reactions in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/activity/p/4094/ Wed, 09 May 2018 15:25:56 -0400 I think it would but you’d have to make it believable to his personality. He would need to be the type prone to rash decisions and quick to anger. Someone who acts without thinking or worrying about the consequences. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 edf76991990a6fa27fff1641c4c68a8b Linz replied to the topic Needing Advice - My Characters Reactions in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/activity/p/4043/ Wed, 09 May 2018 02:45:52 -0400 @ariel-ashira

Audrey had some great points. They also might be hesitant with him after initial happiness as they decide how to tell him his sister died. After all, he wanted to save her no matter what even if it meant going to prison or being killed, so they might be worried Joshua would react violently when he finds out. Just one more layer to…[Read more]

]]> 0 8c8fee9b88d11ee433b0f1d743355844 Linz replied to the topic Needing Advice - My Characters Reactions in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/activity/p/3702/ Sun, 06 May 2018 17:58:53 -0400 I really like this premise Ariel. ๐Ÿ™‚

If he actually committed the crime they might be hesitant to accept him back into their lives. But if he were innocent or they didn’t consider his “crime” a real crime I think they’d be overjoyed to have him back.

I think when it all plays out in the story matters too. If he comes home halfway through the…[Read more]

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