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Dakota replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy Can I join in on this?
So here is my description for critique.
Her clothes hung in tatters from her body. She stood before him – or rather below him for their difference in height-, with every nerve in her frame quivering. Each breath heaved her thin shoulders as they spilled out of her in ragged gasps. Streaks of dirt…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
And yes, I know that is song.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@naiya-dyani Yeah, I realized that after I wrote this. 😁
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
This one is another very personal to me. Critique and enjoy!
Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 3 years, 9 months ago
@omi Cool! I look forward to it.
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Dakota commented on the post, Pain Well 3 years, 9 months ago
I love this!
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Dakota replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 3 years, 9 months ago
@omi This is just lovely!! I don’t see anything I would change in it. Good work. 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Would you rather be a space pirate or a time-traveler?
Dayton: *ponders the question bit more serious this time* “A space pirate.”
Alan: “Oh yeah!! That would be awesome. I’m a HUGE fan of sci-fi!”
Rob: “Time traveler.”
Jim: “Yup. Time traveler.”
Megyn: *eyes sparkling* “I’ve always dreamed of time travel . . .”
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Dakota replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy LOL, right? And it’s a lot of fun!
This one is what my life is like sometimes . . . very. confusing.
Megyn, when like 10
*studying a piece of music, nose crinkled in a cute frown*
Candy (age 9): “What ya working on??”
Megyn: *Absent-mindedly* This piece.
Candy: *puzzled* Piece of what?
Megyn: “Music.”
Candy: “What’s a…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.
Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!
True North
It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 3 years, 10 months ago
@sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@esmeralda-gramilton Great job!
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@kayla-skywriter It’s alright. It looks great!
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Dakota posted a new activity comment 3 years, 11 months ago
@joelle-stone Yep! And the next one isn’t too far off. 😉
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story Photography Thread in the forum Characters 3 years, 11 months ago
@arindown Thanks! I really liked your paintings, especially the one of the lion cub.
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Dakota posted a new activity comment 3 years, 11 months ago
@joelle-stone Thanks! And it’s Word War Group 2.
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Dakota posted a new activity comment 3 years, 11 months ago
@joelle-stone 6,511. Yep, they’re motivating. 😉
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Dakota commented on the post, I Took a Walk Among the Forest Pines 3 years, 11 months ago
Love it!
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Dakota posted a new activity comment 3 years, 11 months ago
Congratulations, @joelle-stone!
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story Photography Thread in the forum Characters 3 years, 11 months ago
@arindown I actually have two accounts. They’re both for my two business endeavors. @dakotasmusings is my poetry wall art account; @dakotashues is my tie-dye/crochet/natural dye account. You can follow either one. 🙂
58k is really good! I don’t have a up to date word count on my WIP . . . all I know is that it’s a lot! 😉
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